Dragonite Saves the day! (A better watstory) Also, Aggron VS Mence!

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Using my Rock Polish Aggron set. My team consists of: SR Hippowdon, Aggron, WishBlissey, NP Mismagius, MixNite, and CS Heracross.
Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause, Self-KO Clause, Soul Dew Clause
jakol sent out Hippowdon (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).
zack7521 sent out Black Iron (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).
Black Iron's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
A sandstorm brewed!
Hippowdon's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Black Iron used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
Hippowdon used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
The sandstorm rages.

Ahh, a Hippowdon. It's fairly obvious it's running a SR set. They run Roar,EQ,and SR. Mine has slack off, but I'm not sure what it has. Both have lefties.

Black Iron used Earthquake.
Hippowdon lost 23% of its health.
Hippowdon used Roar.
zack7521 switched in StarShadow (lvl 100 Mismagius ?).
Pointed stones dug into StarShadow.
StarShadow lost 12% of its health.

Thought I would EQ it, and if he switches, then EQ does good damage to whatever he switches in. But he's probably going to do something to weaken me, or take down Black Iron. Nasty Plot could set up, if he chooses to attack with something other than EQ. But he might have Slack Off, but I'll take the chance.

StarShadow used Nasty Plot.
StarShadow's special attack was sharply raised.
Hippowdon used Roar.
zack7521 switched in Caitlyn (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Pointed stones dug into Caitlyn.
Caitlyn lost 12% of its health.

Damn, but it won't do much to keep roaring. I think I should Seismic Toss. Caitlyn also has toxic, but Seismic Toss brings them down faster. SS has lefties BTW.

Caitlyn used Seismic Toss.
Hippowdon lost 24% of its health.
Hippowdon used Roar.
zack7521 switched in Shining Silver (lvl 100 Aggron ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shining Silver.
Shining Silver lost 6% of its health.

Damn, not my Aggron. If he dies, I lose one of my chances to win. StarShadow is the other and he's not too reliable. I'll put SS in cause he has levitate, and I doubt his Hippowdon has something other than EQ even if he predicts this.

zack7521 switched in StarShadow (lvl 100 Mismagius ?).
Pointed stones dug into StarShadow.
StarShadow lost 12% of its health.
Hippowdon used Earthquake.
StarShadow makes ground moves miss with Levitate!

Easy prediction.

StarShadow used Nasty Plot.
StarShadow's special attack was sharply raised.
Hippowdon used Roar.
zack7521 switched in Shining Silver (lvl 100 Aggron ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shining Silver.
Shining Silver lost 6% of its health.

Looking back, this was a terrible move. Guess I got overconfident.

zack7521 switched in AirJet (lvl 100 Dragonite ?).
Pointed stones dug into AirJet.
AirJet lost 25% of its health.
Hippowdon used Roar.
zack7521 switched in Black Iron (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).

AirJet also has ground immunity, but he obviously predicted that. But I got Black Iron! Now it all comes down to a speed tie, unless he has a speed lowering nature, which is VERY unlikely. Then I can roar him to something I can kill.

Black Iron used Roar.
jakol switched in Regirock (lvl 100 Regirock).
Pointed stones dug into Regirock.
Regirock lost 12% of its health.

Yeah! He thinks I'm gonna EQ, but I'm gonna roar it away. Time for SR abuse!

jakol switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Pointed stones dug into Gengar.
Gengar lost 12% of its health.
Black Iron used Roar.
jakol switched in Hippowdon (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).

Speed Tie Again! Gotta roar him away again, not sure if EQ can kill him.

Hippowdon used Earthquake.
A critical hit!
Black Iron lost 43% of its health.
Black Iron used Roar.
jakol switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Pointed stones dug into Blissey.
Blissey lost 12% of its health.

Piece of cake. EQ can murder Blissey!

Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Black Iron lost 24% of its health.
Black Iron used Earthquake.
Blissey lost 43% of its health.

Ohhh, kinda low on health right now. But another EQ can kill it, but if Blissey uses Softboiled it will barely do anything.

Blissey used Softboiled.
Blissey restored 50% of its health.
Black Iron used Earthquake.
Blissey lost 43% of its health.

This is gonna go on for a while isn't it? Hmmm, I could roar it, but I'm at and advantage.

jakol switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Pointed stones dug into Gengar.
Gengar lost 12% of its health.
Black Iron used Earthquake.
Gengar makes ground moves miss with Levitate!

Damn! Now it's going to die, unless I switch in something else. But sacrificing him will do, he doesn't have much use anymore.

Gengar used Shadow Ball.
Black Iron lost 58% of its health.
zack7521's Black Iron fainted.
Gengar lost 10% of its health.

Megacross has Night Slash, a great move to smack Gengar with. It won't do much if he switches but I don't think he will. He probably knows I have Close Combat and Megahorn and probably Stone Edge.

zack7521 switched in MegaCross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Pointed stones dug into MegaCross.
MegaCross lost 12% of its health.
MegaCross used Night Slash.
It's super effective!
Gengar lost 53% of its health.
jakol's Gengar fainted.

Tyranitar, Night Slash won't do much to him and he could easily kill me.

jakol switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Pointed stones dug into Tyranitar.
Tyranitar lost 12% of its health.
zack7521 switched in StarShadow (lvl 100 Mismagius ?).
Pointed stones dug into StarShadow.
StarShadow lost 12% of its health.
Tyranitar used Aqua Tail.
StarShadow lost 63% of its health.
zack7521's StarShadow fainted.

Sacrificing SS was the only one who wouldn't be much useful anymore, and he never sets up right so I knew I had to send him out. Now MC can kill with a STAB CC, but be locked into it. CC can deal with TTar,Regirock, Blissey, and maybe possibly Hippowdon.

zack7521 switched in MegaCross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Pointed stones dug into MegaCross.
MegaCross lost 12% of its health.
jakol switched in Hippowdon (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).
Hippowdon's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Pointed stones dug into Hippowdon.
Hippowdon lost 6% of its health.
MegaCross used Close Combat.
Hippowdon lost 41% of its health.

Let's go for it one more time!

MegaCross used Close Combat.
A critical hit!
Hippowdon lost 50% of its health.
jakol's Hippowdon fainted.

Yay for hax! Don't know what would've happened if not for that crit, but MC would just take a turn longer to kill it presumably if it use EQ. Roar would probably a annoying minute wasted and possibly a loss if Airjet kept coming in.

jakol switched in Regirock (lvl 100 Regirock).
Pointed stones dug into Regirock.
Regirock lost 12% of its health.
MegaCross used Close Combat.
It's super effective!
Regirock lost 71% of its health.
MegaCross's defence was lowered.
MegaCross's special defence was lowered.
Regirock used Stone Edge.
MegaCross lost 57% of its health.
zack7521's MegaCross fainted.

MC failed but it still weakened Regirock.

zack7521 switched in AirJet (lvl 100 Dragonite ?).
Pointed stones dug into AirJet.
AirJet lost 25% of its health.
AirJet used Superpower.
It's super effective!
Regirock lost 16% of its health.
jakol's Regirock fainted.

Victory for me! Just Blissey and one pokemon left!

jakol switched in Lucario (lvl 100 Lucario ?).
Pointed stones dug into Lucario.
Lucario lost 3% of its health.
Lucario used Agility.
Lucario's speed was sharply raised.
AirJet used Superpower.
It's super effective!
Lucario lost 97% of its health.
jakol's Lucario fainted.

Argh, what to do, what to do... Aggron will be murdered,and Blissey can't take enough attacks before it could kill with Seismic toss. Something told me to use Superpower, so I did, and bam! It didn't use ES and I killed it!!!

zack7521: lol fail
jakol: i thought that you'd switch
zack7521: No setting up on an opponent who can OHKO
jakol: truee
jakol: but i thought youd think im SD and fear the extreme speed
zack7521: U saw it had superpower
jakol: yea so ur mixed?

My skill of not learning movesets of common OU pokemon has come in handy!

jakol switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Pointed stones dug into Tyranitar.
Tyranitar lost 12% of its health.
AirJet used Superpower.
It's super effective!
Tyranitar lost 75% of its health.
jakol's Tyranitar fainted.

"zack7521: Sweet" Easy choice, and I've won already.

jakol switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Pointed stones dug into Blissey.
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
AirJet used Superpower.
It's super effective!
Blissey lost 39% of its health.
jakol's Blissey fainted.
AirJet's attack was lowered.
AirJet's defence was lowered.
AirJet lost 2% of its health.
zack7521's AirJet fainted.
zack7521 wins!
jakol: ahh gg
zack7521: GG
jakol has left the room.
Victory!

Pros
Airjet dominated!
Megacross saved us from TTar

Cons
Aggron didn't do much, then again I didn't need to use him
Mismagius again.

And now here is my Shine Hero VS Salamence where he became a hero!

Rules: Sleep Clause, Species Clause
zack7521 sent out Black Iron (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).
soulboy sent out Forretress (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
Black Iron's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
A sandstorm brewed!
Black Iron used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
Forretress used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
The sandstorm rages.

SR Set up.

Forretress used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Black Iron used Roar.
soulboy switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Pointed stones dug into Jirachi.
Jirachi lost 6% of its health.

NO SPIKES 4 U!

Jirachi used Energy Ball.
It's super effective!
Black Iron lost 38% of its health.
Black Iron used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 66% of its health.

Black Iron is strong enough to take a few hits. Jirachi is weak to EQ so that will kill it.

Jirachi used Water Pulse.
It's super effective!
Black Iron lost 31% of its health.
Black Iron used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 73% of its health.
soulboy's Jirachi fainted.

Kool *Puts on Sunglasses*

soulboy switched in Forretress (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
Pointed stones dug into Forretress.
Forretress lost 12% of its health.
Forretress used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Black Iron used Roar.
soulboy switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
Pointed stones dug into Metagross.

Damn, gotta get rid of that damn forretress. Let's EQ MG to death!

Metagross used Ice Punch.
It's super effective!
Black Iron lost 31% of its health.
Black Iron used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Metagross lost 76% of its health.

Not going down that easily.

Metagross used Ice Punch.
It's super effective!
Black Iron lost 30% of its health.
zack7521's Black Iron fainted.

Weakened it well. Now it's time for MC to finish it off!

zack7521 switched in MegaCross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Pointed stones dug into MegaCross.
MegaCross lost 12% of its health.
MegaCross was hurt by Spikes!
MegaCross lost 19% of its health.
MegaCross used Megahorn.
Metagross lost 68% of its health.
soulboy's Metagross fainted.

Argh, damn forretress!!! I'm not wasting a turn switching out. Let's just keep going at it!

soulboy switched in Forretress (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
Pointed stones dug into Forretress.
Forretress lost 12% of its health.
MegaCross used Megahorn.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 26% of its health.
Forretress used Toxic Spikes.
Toxic Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
The sandstorm rages.
MegaCross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
MegaCross lost 6% of its health.
MegaCross used Megahorn.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 28% of its health.
Forretress used Rest.
Forretress fell asleep!
Forretress's Chesto Berry cured its Sleep!
Forretress restored 79% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
MegaCross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
MegaCross lost 6% of its health.
MegaCross used Megahorn.
MegaCross's attack missed!
Forretress used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
The sandstorm rages.
MegaCross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
MegaCross lost 6% of its health.
MegaCross used Megahorn.
MegaCross's attack missed!
Forretress used Spikes.
But it failed!
The sandstorm rages.
MegaCross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
MegaCross lost 6% of its health.
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MegaCross used Megahorn.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 29% of its health.
Forretress used Toxic Spikes.
Toxic Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
The sandstorm rages.
MegaCross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
MegaCross lost 6% of its health.
..... Skipping alot
MegaCross used Megahorn.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 28% of its health.
Forretress woke up!
Forretress used Spikes.
But it failed!
The sandstorm rages.
MegaCross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
MegaCross lost 6% of its health.
---

MegaCross used Megahorn.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 26% of its health.
soulboy's Forretress fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
MegaCross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
MegaCross lost 6% of its health.
zack7521's MegaCross fainted.

Finally!!! Also this is a great time to put in aggron! If he has an advantage, rock polish and sweep. If not, switch to counter!

zack7521 switched in Shining Silver (lvl 100 Aggron ?).
soulboy switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shining Silver.
Shining Silver lost 6% of its health.
Shining Silver was hurt by Spikes!
Shining Silver lost 25% of its health.
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Pointed stones dug into Tyranitar.
Tyranitar lost 12% of its health.
zack7521 switched in StarShadow (lvl 100 Mismagius ?).
Pointed stones dug into StarShadow.
StarShadow lost 12% of its health.
Tyranitar used Ice Beam.
StarShadow lost 24% of its health.

Oho, TTar. Starshadow might be able to do something.

StarShadow used Nasty Plot.
StarShadow's special attack was sharply raised.
Tyranitar used Flamethrower.
StarShadow lost 28% of its health.
StarShadow was burned!
The sandstorm rages.

Yeah, set up, now time to hit with a STAB Shadow ball.

StarShadow used Shadow Ball.
It's not very effective...
Tyranitar lost 21% of its health.
Tyranitar used Flamethrower.
StarShadow lost 26% of its health.
zack7521's StarShadow fainted.

Damn, not good enough. Airjet can superpower and maybe I can secure a win like last match.

zack7521 switched in AirJet (lvl 100 Dragonite ?).
Pointed stones dug into AirJet.
AirJet lost 25% of its health.
AirJet used Superpower.
It's super effective!
Tyranitar lost 160% of its health.

YEAH! OH NOES Another Lucario? NP kill it!

soulboy switched in Lucario (lvl 100 Lucario ?).
Pointed stones dug into Lucario.
Lucario lost 3% of its health.
AirJet used Superpower.
It's super effective!
Lucario lost 90% of its health.
AirJet's attack was lowered.
AirJet's defence was lowered.
AirJet lost 10% of its health.
Lucario used Aura Sphere.
It's not very effective...
AirJet lost 21% of its health.

Another round and I'll take it down!

Lucario used Extremespeed.
AirJet lost 50% of its health.
zack7521's AirJet fainted.
The sandstorm rages.

What?! Why didn't it use that instead of aura sphere before?! Let's switch in Blissey

zack7521 switched in Caitlyn (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Pointed stones dug into Caitlyn.
Caitlyn lost 12% of its health.
Caitlyn was hurt by Spikes!
Caitlyn lost 25% of its health.
Caitlyn was badly poisoned!
Caitlyn was badly poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
Lucario used Extremespeed.
Caitlyn lost 43% of its health.
Caitlyn used Seismic Toss.
Lucario lost 36% of its health.
soulboy's Lucario fainted.

There we go! WHAT SALAMENCE!?! Oh yeah I'm on TeamUber server. Nothing I can do.

soulboy switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's Intimidate cut Caitlyn's attack!
Pointed stones dug into Salamence.
Salamence lost 25% of its health.
Salamence used Brick Break.
It's super effective!
Caitlyn lost 118% of its health.
zack7521's Caitlyn fainted.

You did good, Caitlyn.


zack7521 switched in Shining Silver (lvl 100 Aggron ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shining Silver.
Shining Silver lost 6% of its health.
Shining Silver was hurt by Spikes!
Shining Silver lost 25% of its health.
Salamence used Flamethrower.
Shining Silver lost 30% of its health.
Shining Silver used Head Smash.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
Salamence lost 575% of its health.
soulboy's Salamence fainted.
Shining Silver lost 10% of its health.
zack7521's Shining Silver fainted.
zack7521: GO HEAD SMASH!
zack7521: TIE?!
zack7521: GG
soulboy: lol
soulboy: gg
zack7521: YAY SHINE HERO DEFEATS MENCE!
zack7521: I never thought he had it in him
zack7521: I'm so proud :*)
zack7521: I was thinking to Rock Polish, but if this was a MixMence, then I would die and maybe even if it was a Physical and Speed+ nature
soulboy has left the room.

zack7521 wins! (It wouldn't calculate? IDK why he left while it was still registering)
WHOA! THE CRIT I NEEDED!!! (Actually it would still be a tie. 575/2 is greater than 100. But it's still awesome) SHINE HERO YOU ARE SO AWESOME! Although the server wasn't registering it was a tie, so soulboy left the room. This was a great match. Maybe if I had taken down Forretress earlier, than it couldn't have set up as many spikes securing the win. But wherever you are soulboy, thanks for such an awesome match.




 
Well, they weren't good battles, there were no great predictions and not very original movesets. Also your opponents were noobs. Your second opponent had a 4x effective attack and should have destroyed you with brick break.
And why did you stay with heracross against foretress? He didn't have attacking moves and you could have set up with aggron to destroy his team.
 
Small nitpick but using some images when listing your team members and your opponent's would be quite useful. Also don't keep repeating obvious statements such as 'Damn, gotta get rid of that damn forretress. Let's EQ MG to death!'. Comment on your thought process as that helps the reader imagine what your going through while playing.
 
Well, not to demoralize you, but this isn't exactly a good warstory. Comments, again, were poor, and the battles were full of mistakes and lacking of predictions. Try to pick exciting battles, and try to explain clearly your thoughts. I think you need some more experience, too. Good luck for the future!
 
Well, they weren't good battles, there were no great predictions and not very original movesets. Also your opponents were noobs. Your second opponent had a 4x effective attack and should have destroyed you with brick break.
And why did you stay with heracross against foretress? He didn't have attacking moves and you could have set up with aggron to destroy his team.
Umm, maybe because Aggron's denfense is 180? And it's Sp Defence is 60?
 
Umm, maybe because Aggron's denfense is 180? And it's Sp Defence is 60?
so you're saying a neutral flamethrower is better than a 4x effective brick break? 75x4=300 WHICH I THINK IS BIGGER THAN 95.

But hey, it's only over 3 times bigger so it's hard to distinguish...

BASHFUL 0 EVs SALAMENCE USING BRICK BREAK AGAINST ROCK POLISH AGGRON: 59.8% - 71.2% (and your aggron had less than 40%)

Yeah, this pretty much shows you have very little experience and knowledge about the game...
 

Its_A_Random

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Pick better battles for your warstories, not ones full of hax & mistakes.
Also for future warstories, expand your comments, make your thought process clear, don't just give two sentences. Do that and maybe, just maybe, you'll get some praise. Keep trying!
 

Athenodoros

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I thought about reading this, but scanned over it first and saw the change from bright green, to bright blue, to red, and it put me off. This warstory will have the undying hatred of the cones in my eyes for eternity, but I'm sure you could make many more people read it just by changing those.
 
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