Last Shroom Standing (An OU Warstory)

[Dummy007]

How's it going? This is my second warstory, featuring a very good match between me and an opponent named 85. Let's cut to the chase!

My team:
(Pictures soon)





85's moves will look like this.
Dummy007's moves will look like this.
other text will look like this.
Leftovers will be removed.
Sandstorm/hail damage will be removed.
Scores will be shown after each KO.
Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause
85 sent out Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Dummy007 sent out Fleza (lvl 100 Azelf).
Dummy007 switched in Sodarayg (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Sodarayg's Intimidate cut Jirachi's attack!
Jirachi used Body Slam.
Sodarayg lost 19% of its health.
Sodarayg is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
---
Azelf: 100%
Gyarados: 89%, paralyzed
Jirachi: 100%
---
I switch to Gyarados here expecting Trick, Iron Head, or U-Turn. Unfortunately, Gyarados ends up crippled for the rest of the match. I've never seen a Lead Jirachi with Body Slam, so this was a big surprise.
---
85 switched in Zapdos (lvl 100 Zapdos).
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
Sodarayg is paralysed! It can't move!
---
Zapdos: 100%
Gyarados: 95%, ticked at hax gods
---
Naturally, I keep Gyarados in to scout the switch, and it turns out to be none other than Zapdos, Gyarados's biggest counter. I don't expect him to Thunderbolt just yet, so I'll Stone Edge to scout or cripple it.
---
Zapdos used Substitute.
Zapdos lost 25% of its health.
Zapdos made a substitute!
Sodarayg used Stone Edge.
It's super effective!
The substitute took damage for Zapdos!
Zapdos's substitute faded!
---
Zapdos: 81%, angry
Gyarados: 100%, grinning evilly
---
Perfect. Zapdos now knows Gyarados can break its Sub, so I'll go to my best Substitute Zapdos response.
---
Dummy007 switched in Ratinaryt (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Ratinaryt's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
A sandstorm brewed!
Zapdos used Thunderbolt.
A critical hit!
Ratinaryt lost 44% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Zapdos: 81%
Tyranitar: 62%, mad
---
The crit was pretty nasty, but Tyranitar can still take a hit. I know that Zapdos's last move is Heat Wave, and I'm running a Boah, so I'll Substitute to scout the switch.
---
85 switched in Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ?).
Ratinaryt used Substitute.
Ratinaryt lost 25% of its health.
Ratinaryt made a substitute!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Scizor: 100%, staring intently
Tyranitar: 53%, Substitute
---
Scizor. The bane of all Tyranitars' existence. While I'm here, I'll Focus Punch to scout its move and put a little damage on it. I have nothing to gain by switching, so here goes!
---
Ratinaryt is tightening its focus!
Scizor used Bullet Punch.
It's super effective!
The substitute took damage for Ratinaryt!
Ratinaryt's substitute faded!
Ratinaryt used Focus Punch.
Scizor lost 44% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Scizor: 56%
Tyranitar: 59%
---
Focus Punch puts a giant dent in Scizor's metal exoskeleton as Tyranitar bids him farewell.
---
Dummy007 switched in Sodarayg (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Sodarayg's Intimidate cut Scizor's attack!
Scizor used Bullet Punch.
It's not very effective...
Sodarayg lost 13% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Gyarados: 87%, paralyzed
Scizor: 56%
---
Gyarados can still Intimidate, so I guess he's not totally worthless. I anticipate a switch back to Zapdos, so Stone Edge it is!
---
85 switched in Zapdos (lvl 100 Zapdos).
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
Sodarayg is paralysed! It can't move!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Zapdos: 81%, smiling devilishly
Gyarados: 87%, paralyzed
---
...or, at least, it would have been, if it weren't for that meddling paralysis and its dumb dog. I'll Stone Edge again since he'll expect me to go directly to Tyranitar while not passing Go or collecting $200.
---
Zapdos used Substitute.
Zapdos lost 25% of its health.
Zapdos made a substitute!
Sodarayg used Stone Edge.
It's super effective!
The substitute took damage for Zapdos!
Zapdos's substitute faded!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Zapdos: 56%
Gyarados: 87%, paralyzed
---
A perfect play. It's somewhat strange that the match is still 6-6 at this point, but things are starting to heat up. Gyarados has no further use, so Stone Edge ftw!
---
Zapdos used Substitute.
Zapdos lost 25% of its health.
Zapdos made a substitute!
Sodarayg is paralysed! It can't move!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Zapdos: 31%, Substitute
Gyarados: 87%, paralyzed, cursing his misfortune
---
Stupid parahax is stupid. Zapdos is now an actual threat behind a Substitute. Tyranitar still walls it all day, so he's my choice.
---
Dummy007 switched in Ratinaryt (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Ratinaryt's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Zapdos used Thunderbolt.
Ratinaryt lost 21% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Tyranitar: 45%
Zapdos: 31%, Substitute
---
Tyranitar takes the hit like a dictator. Crunch will easily dispose of that Sub, but nothing prepares me for what happens next...
---
Zapdos used Toxic.
Ratinaryt was badly poisoned!
Ratinaryt used Crunch.
The substitute took damage for Zapdos!
Zapdos's substitute faded!
The sandstorm rages.
Ratinaryt is hurt by poison!
Ratinaryt lost 6% of its health.
---
Tyranitar: 45%, Toxic'd
Zapdos: 31%
---
Toxic turns out to be the final move in Zapdos's arsenal. Thankfully its Sub is gone, meaning it's nowhere near as threatening now. I anticipate Roost, but have a momentary lapse in brain function and click 'Ice Beam' anyway. This turns out to be a critical move.
---
Zapdos used Roost.
Zapdos restored 50% of its health.
Ratinaryt used Ice Beam.
Zapdos lost 26% of its health.
Zapdos was frozen solid!
The sandstorm rages.
Ratinaryt is hurt by poison!
Ratinaryt lost 12% of its health.
---
Tyranitar: 35%, Toxic'd
Zapdos: 55%, Frozen
---
I suppose Freeze hax makes up for those three turns of parahax earlier. Zapdos is now disabled beyond repair, so I can finally get rid of it.
---
Zapdos is frozen solid!
Ratinaryt used Crunch.
Zapdos lost 35% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Ratinaryt is hurt by poison!
Ratinaryt lost 19% of its health.
---
Tyranitar: 23%, Toxic'd
Zapdos: 20%, Frozen
---
I should have gone with Ice Beam, but it makes no difference in the end.
---
85 switched in Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ?).
Ratinaryt used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Scizor lost 16% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Ratinaryt is hurt by poison!
Ratinaryt lost 23% of its health.
Dummy007's Ratinaryt fainted.
(6-5)
---
Scizor: 40%
Tyranitar: Assassinated by poisoning
---
...or does it? Zapdos remains in cryogenic stasis while Scizor takes a light hit during the fall of Sand-dam Hussein. You did good, buddy. On the plus side, I can bring in every Scizor's worst nightmare: Rotom-H!
---
Dummy007 switched in Hmotor (lvl 100 Rotom-h).
85 switched in Zapdos (lvl 100 Zapdos).
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
Hmotor used Substitute.
Hmotor lost 25% of its health.
Hmotor made a substitute!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Rotom-h: 75%, Substitute
Zapdos: 20%, Frozen
---
Zapdos comes back in as death fodder while Rotom Subs up. I'm running SubCharge Rotom, so I can now use Zapdos as set-up fodder.
---
Zapdos is frozen solid!
Hmotor used Charge Beam.
Zapdos lost 20% of its health.
85's Zapdos fainted.
(5-5)
Hmotor's special attack was raised.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Rotom-h: 75%, Substitute, +1 SpA
Zapdos: Killed in cryostasis
---
Zapdos finally bites the dust, giving Rotom a power boost along the way. Things are starting to look up.
---
85 switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Hmotor used Charge Beam.
Heatran lost 33% of its health.
Hmotor's special attack was raised.
Heatran used Fire Blast.
The substitute took damage for Hmotor!
Hmotor's substitute faded!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Heatran: 67%
Rotom-h: 75%, +2 SpA
---
Heatran comes in, which is never a good thing. Fortunately, I'm sitting at +2, but to be on the safe side...
---
Hmotor used Substitute.
Hmotor lost 25% of its health.
Hmotor made a substitute!
Heatran used Fire Blast.
The substitute took damage for Hmotor!
Hmotor's substitute faded!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Heatran: 67%
Rotom-h: 50%, +2 SpA
---
...I try to stall for a Fire Blast miss. Sadly, I don't think it will happen, but if it does, Rotom is going to cause some pain.
---
Hmotor used Substitute.
Hmotor lost 25% of its health.
Hmotor made a substitute!
Heatran used Fire Blast.
The substitute took damage for Hmotor!
Hmotor's substitute faded!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Heatran: 67%
Rotom-h: 25%, +2 SpA
---
Hmotor used Charge Beam.
Heatran lost 45% of its health.
Hmotor's special attack was raised.
Heatran used Fire Blast.
Hmotor lost 25% of its health.
Dummy007's Hmotor fainted.
(5-4)
The sandstorm rages.
---
Heatran: 22%
Rotom-h: Burned at the stake, +3 SpA
---
I can no longer Substitute, so I fire off a Charge Beam for some damage. Nothing left on my team will enjoy eating a Fire Blast, but I'm confident that Heatran is Specs'd meaning Jirachi can enter the fray.
---
Dummy007 switched in Ihcarij (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Ihcarij used Substitute.
Ihcarij lost 25% of its health.
Ihcarij made a substitute!
Heatran used Fire Blast.
It's super effective!
The substitute took damage for Ihcarij!
Ihcarij's substitute faded!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Heatran: 22%
Jirachi: 81%
---
I try to stall for a Fire Blast miss so I can get a Calm Mind, but the hax gods have apparently determined that one freeze is enough for me.
---
Ihcarij used Thunderbolt.
Heatran lost 22% of its health.
85's Heatran fainted.
(4-4)
The sandstorm rages.
---
Jirachi: 87%
Heatran: Electrocuted
---
I drop Heatran with a burst of electrical energy, tying the match up once again. Jirachi should fare pretty well against whatever comes in (at least, I hope).
---
85 switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
Dummy007 switched in Sodarayg (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Sodarayg's Intimidate cut Infernape's attack!
Infernape used Overheat.
It's not very effective...
Sodarayg lost 35% of its health.
Infernape's special attack was harshly lowered.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Gyarados: 52%, paralyzed
Infernape: 84%
---
Infernape happens to be the one Pokemon Jirachi would never want to tangle with unless he was safely behind a Sub. I go to Gyara expecting a Flare Blitz, but he still takes the Overheat, meaning Infernape is returning home. I go for an EQ here, since it will KO Infernape and Scizor and put a giant dent in Jirachi.
---
Infernape used U-turn.
It's not very effective...
Sodarayg lost 10% of its health.
85 switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
Sodarayg used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 64% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Infernape: 74%
Gyarados: 42%, paralyzed
Jirachi: 36%
---
My prediction is pretty good today, meaning Jirachi eats an EQ. Gyarados really has nothing else to do, so I'll try to beat Jirachi.
---
Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
Sodarayg lost 38% of its health.
Sodarayg flinched!
The sandstorm rages.
Dummy007's Sodarayg fainted.
(4-3)
---
Gyarados: Flinched to death
Jirachi: 36%, smiling
---
The sand brings about poor Gyara's demise. He did a lot for a paralyzed Gyarados, though, and for that I will be forever grateful. My remaining Pokemon are Jirachi, Azelf, and Breloom, so Jirachi is the safest choice.
---
Dummy007 switched in Ihcarij (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Jirachi used Fire Punch.
It's super effective!
Ihcarij lost 34% of its health.
Ihcarij used Substitute.
Ihcarij lost 25% of its health.
Ihcarij made a substitute!
The sandstorm rages.
---
Jirachi (mine): 34%, Substitute
Jirachi (his): 36%
---
I hang on with enough health to Sub, so I can now T-Bolt his Rachi to its doom (desire).
---
Jirachi used Fire Punch.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
The substitute took damage for Ihcarij!
Ihcarij's substitute faded!
Ihcarij used Thunderbolt.
Jirachi lost 22% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Jirachi (mine): 40%
Jirachi (his): 14%
---
My Sub is gone, but Fire Punch won't do enough to KO me. Thunderbolt will win me this matchup.
---
Jirachi used Fire Punch.
It's super effective!
Ihcarij lost 37% of its health.
Ihcarij used Thunderbolt.
Jirachi lost 14% of its health.
85's Jirachi fainted.
(3-3)
The sandstorm rages.
---
Jirachi (mine): 9%
Jirachi (his): Electric chair'd
---
The game is tied up again. I now realize that we've traded KOs the whole match. He's got Infernape, Scizor, and a mystery Poke. I wonder what he'll bring in.
---
85 switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
Infernape used U-turn.
Ihcarij lost 10% of its health.
Dummy007's Ihcarij fainted.
(3-2)
85 switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Jirachi: U-Turn'd
Infernape: 64%
Blissey: 94%
---
He U-Turns for the KO, but he reveals his final Pokemon: Blissey! Breloom should be able to Spore safely now, so come on out, Mega Mushroom!
---
Dummy007 switched in Moolerb (lvl 100 Breloom ?).
Moolerb used Spore.
Blissey fell asleep!
Blissey is fast asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Moolerb was badly poisoned!
---
Breloom: 94%, Toxic'd
Blissey: 87%
---
I Spore (obviously) and he leaves Blissey in, which is a good move on his part. Unfortunately, it means Breloom gets a free Sub. Let's see how he responds to this!
---
85 switched in Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ?).
Moolerb used Substitute.
Moolerb lost 25% of its health.
Moolerb made a substitute!
The sandstorm rages.
Moolerb's Poison Heal restored health!
Moolerb restored 13% of its health.
---
Breloom: 75%
Scizor: 40%
---
Scizor comes in to ruin my fun, but my Substitute will allow me to end its buggy life with Focus Punch. Oh, and by the way: 'BRAKE STUPID BUG'
---
Moolerb is tightening its focus!
Scizor used Bullet Punch.
The substitute took damage for Moolerb!
Moolerb's substitute faded!
Moolerb used Focus Punch.
Scizor lost 39% of its health.
85's Scizor fainted.
(2-2)
The sandstorm rages.
Moolerb's Poison Heal restored health!
Moolerb restored 13% of its health.
---
Breloom: 81%
Scizor: FALCON PAWNCHED
---
My Sub is broken in exchange for a KO on Scizor. Lategame is definitely upon us, with my Azelf and Breloom versus his Blissey and Infernape. I know Infernape is coming in, and I know just what to do about it.
---
85 switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
Dummy007 switched in Fleza (lvl 100 Azelf).
Infernape used Overheat.
Fleza lost 94% of its health.
Infernape's special attack was harshly lowered.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Azelf: 1%
Infernape: 48%, -2 SpA
---
Azelf survives by the skin of his...umm...mouth. My purpose for switching back to Azelf was to lower Overheat's power to the point where Breloom could take it. I think Azelf has done his job.
---
Infernape used Mach Punch.
It's not very effective...
Fleza lost 0% of its health.
Dummy007's Fleza fainted.
(2-1)
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Azelf: Xp
Infernape: 32%, -2 SpA
---
Priority > Explosion. Now I have to hope that Overheat won't KO me. Let Azelf's sacrifice not be in vain!
---
Dummy007 switched in Moolerb (lvl 100 Breloom ?).
Infernape used Close Combat.
Moolerb lost 67% of its health.
Infernape's defence was lowered.
Infernape's special defence was lowered.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
Moolerb used Spore.
Infernape fell asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Moolerb's Poison Heal restored health!
Moolerb restored 13% of its health.
---
Infernape: 16%, Napping, -2 SpA, -1 Def, -1 SpD
Breloom: 21%
---
Alternatively, he could Close Combat, which I know Breloom can survive. I can win this now, I realize. Everything has just fallen into place.
---
85 switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Moolerb used Leech Seed.
Blissey was seeded!
The sandstorm rages.
Moolerb's Poison Heal restored health!
Moolerb restored 13% of its health.
Blissey's health was sapped by leech seed!
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
Moolerb regained health!
Moolerb restored 28% of its health.
---
Blissey: 69%, Seeded
Breloom: 56%
---
I Leech Seed for a little recovery, but I get instead a ton of recovery. Breloom is now primed to win this.
---
Moolerb used Substitute.
Moolerb lost 25% of its health.
Moolerb made a substitute!
Blissey used Ice Beam.
It's super effective!
The substitute took damage for Moolerb!
Moolerb's substitute faded!
The sandstorm rages.
Moolerb's Poison Heal restored health!
Moolerb restored 13% of its health.
Blissey's health was sapped by leech seed!
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
Moolerb regained health!
Moolerb restored 28% of its health.
---
Blissey: 51%, Seeded
Breloom: 66%
---
Breloom continues to gain health while he Substitutes, meaning Blissey will not defeat him. Stallin' Time!
---
Moolerb used Substitute.
Moolerb lost 25% of its health.
Moolerb made a substitute!
Blissey used Softboiled.
Blissey restored 50% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Moolerb's Poison Heal restored health!
Moolerb restored 13% of its health.
Blissey's health was sapped by leech seed!
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
Moolerb regained health!
Moolerb restored 28% of its health.
---
Blissey: 82%, Seeded
Breloom: 76%, Substitute
---
Focus Punch should seal the deal here. Everything is good.
---
Moolerb is tightening its focus!
Blissey used Ice Beam.
It's super effective!
The substitute took damage for Moolerb!
Moolerb's substitute faded!
Moolerb used Focus Punch.
It's super effective!
Blissey lost 58% of its health.
The Chople Berry weakened Focus Punch's power!
The sandstorm rages.
Moolerb's Poison Heal restored health!
Moolerb restored 13% of its health.
Blissey's health was sapped by leech seed!
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
Moolerb regained health!
Moolerb restored 21% of its health.
---
Blissey: 6%
Breloom: 100%
---
I did not pay attention to the lack of Leftovers until now, but it made no difference in the end. Back to stalling!
---
Moolerb used Substitute.
Moolerb lost 25% of its health.
Moolerb made a substitute!
Blissey used Ice Beam.
It's super effective!
The substitute took damage for Moolerb!
Moolerb's substitute faded!
The sandstorm rages.
85's Blissey fainted.
(1-1)
Moolerb's Poison Heal restored health!
Moolerb restored 13% of its health.
---
Blissey: Buried
Breloom: 81%
---
Game, set, and match. Breloom has proved just how much my team needs him. I prepare my 'gg' when...
---
85 has left the room.
Dummy007 wins!
---
...he leaves. This turn was set in stone, so it really didn't matter. Time for props and slops!

Props:
-Breloom, for being the MVP and just succeeding in general
-Tyranitar, for freezing Zapdos
-Gyarados, for being useful while paralyzed
-His Zapdos, for annoying the crap out of me
-His Infernape, for almost winning him the match

Slops:
-Hax. Three full paras and a freeze are not good things.
-Azelf, for doing almost nothing.
-Rotom, for not getting to sweep

His Team:





This log was formatted using Warmachine Version 1.0

(Not quite done, will finish tomorrow)

 

[Colonel Darren]

It seemed rather average of a warstory to me, and much too haxy at the beginning. Also, I have no idea why you didn't keep Azelf in first turn. Worst case scenario, you get flinched with Iron Head, it's locked, swap to Gyrados. You get tricked, you still get rocks up, and a Scarf Explosion later. I saw very little reason for you to make the first play the way you did.

 

[Comet]

Battle was meh, there wasn't any good plays throughout the entirety of the warstory.
Formatting was poor, no pictures made it boring and harder to follow. The colors were... just too gaudy for a warstory.
Comments were inconsistent and you just said what the log said, they had no real meat on them.

And the ending... If a player leaves, it just kind of ruins the big finale. And it was obvious you were going to win, which didn't hold me in.

I'll be kind and give it a 4/10, for your first shot...

 

[noob3]

/fauxmoderator on

you are actually not supposed to post stories in which one of the two combatants leaves the match

/fauxmoderator off

 

[Darkamber8828]

An average battle makes for an average warstory. And no pictures is sad.

5/10

 

[Mjolnir]

It seemed rather average of a warstory to me, and much too haxy at the beginning. Also, I have no idea why you didn't keep Azelf in first turn. Worst case scenario, you get flinched with Iron Head, it's locked, swap to Gyrados. You get tricked, you still get rocks up, and a Scarf Explosion later. I saw very little reason for you to make the first play the way you did.

This.

Comments next to the health wore on my patience. Also the bold red + blue was too overpowering.

4/10

 

[jad]

Not bad, but it could be better. Here are some suggestions:

-Choose a game that's very close and has very little (game-affecting) hax. Your story had a lot of hax in the beginning and near the end it was obvious that you would win. I'm glad you won the battle, but people want to read a story that's exciting and keeps the audience on their toes until the very end.

-Beef up your commentary. All you really did was state the obvious what-just-happened-and-what-I'm-going-to-do-about-it. We want to get into your brain. Are you analyzing his team? Are you looking into the future? What's your strategy for winning? How did you adapt your strategy when something unexpected happened?

-Pictures are helpful. :)

Good luck with your next story!

 

[ginganinja]

Correct me if I am wrong but it seemed to me that your opponent gave away a win here.

I am refering to when he had just switched out Blissey for Scizor and you got a Sub up. If he had U-turned out he would have broken your Sub and he could sac Bissey to the Focus Punch. (which is no loss since Blissey cannot beat either Breloom or Azelf) From there Infernape comes in and you have nothing to take the overheat. Even if you sac Breloom Infernape can then Mach Punch you and Scizor cleans up with Bullet Punch.

Anyway as far as the warstory itself went it was kinda 'meh'. The batle did not grip me and the ending was very drawn out. I would have liked Pictures as well.

Have a Nice Day!

 

[Salem1]

If you catch Blissey with spore, spore again because he will switch out. Instead of you then having a sub and an awake counter you have a sleeping counter and get a sub on the switch out. Otherwise you need to spend that substitute on merely putting your opponent to sleep again.

 

[whistle]

it was a decent battle but there wasn't really any substance to the comments. try to pick a battle that is a bit more exciting in terms of predictions, and you can also add comments about your long-term plans.

i had to wonder why you didn't kill the heatran when it was at 67% and you had +2 satk... surely you have thunderbolt or hp fighting?

the opponent probably bullet punched because he expected spore (which would have won you the game). unfortunately the other guy kinda did give away the win since infernape's lo overheat ohkos breloom even at -2, and i think infernape was in blaze range which makes it do like 154% minimum...

 

[Dummy007]

Sorry about no pictures, but my connnection timed out on me when I was writing my first warstory and I wanted to post this before it timed out. I'll add pictures soon.

And, no, Rotom's moveset is Sub / Charge Beam / Shadow Ball / Will-o-wisp.

EDIT: Also, my reasoning for switching to Gyarados was this: Whenever I leave Azelf in against a Jirachi, he usually gets flinched to death. I then go to Gyarados, who ALSO usually gets flinched to death. I figured I'd go to Gyara for the Intimidate, then try and stall for a DD. This way I could keep my SRer intact either way. Gyara could have hopefully swept, too. If not, I could go to Jirachi, who could take his Rachi's hits all day and CM up.

 

[Blood Tears]

I think this is an average battle, but I don't like the format and the commentary was quite poor. Pictures are always appreciated, too. Good luck with you next story anyway =)