Nodding Along an OU Ladder Match

[More Cowbell]

For a first warstory, this is pretty damn good. Your commentary is very entertaining, and the story itself is nicely formatted.

The battle could've been better though. Just do some homework and learn some sets, and don't hesitate to look up movesets (Smogon) and weaknesses/resistances (Serebii) throughout the battle, it will greatly help you.

 

[Showsni]

Aerodactyl is excellent to use as a lead since no-one sees it coming.

i was going to stop reading after this, but i was bored and continued.

I think he means offensive Aerodactyl as opposed to suicide lead Aerodactyl.

 

[Chris P. Bacon]

The lack of knowledge about the metagame is what makes this warstory hilarious.

"You won't be getting stealth rock up this time Crobat." Priceless XD.

I'd actually read more warstories like this and for the first warstory post the format is good. 8/10