Monotype Glimmora (Rock)

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[SET]
Glimmora @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Scarf (Rock)
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Earth Power
- Sludge Wave
- Dazzling Gleam
- Energy Ball / Mortal Spin / Power Gem

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its high Special Attack and Speed to take on threats like Ogerpon-W, Hisuian Lilligant, and non-Choice Scarf Urshifu-R. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Iron Moth, and Sneasler. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move that can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as Hisuian Lilligant, Ogerpon-W, Ogerpon-H, and non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant. Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting-types like Sableye, Hydreigon, and Kommo-o. Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like Quagsire and non-Choice Scarf Greninja and Great Tusk. Mortal Spin can be run over Energy Ball to help remove entry hazards and poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run instead to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, Volcarona, and Choice Scarf Kleavor.

Tyranitar provides sand and a Psychic immunity while also taking on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Hisuian Zoroark. Thanks to the sand Tyranitar provides, Glimmora can survive a Choice Specs Draco Meteor from Dragapult due to the Special Defense boost and 2HKO it with Dazzling Gleam. In return, Glimmora also takes out Hisuian Samurott, Quagsire, and Ogerpon-W for Tyranitar. Ogerpon-C can compensate for Glimmora's Ground weakness, and, after setup, it can eliminate Ursaluna-B, Dragonite, and Landorus. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-C by handling threats such as Kleavor when running Power Gem, Iron Valiant, and Hisuian Lilligant. Glimmora can further aid Ogerpon-C with Mortal Spin by removing entry hazards to help prevent Ogerpon-C's Sturdy from breaking. Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker that can deal with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal can serve as entry hazard control to allow Glimmora to drop Mortal Spin; it can additionally support the team with Spikes, facilitating Glimmora's cleaning. Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, Chien-Pao, and Corviknight. Glimmora returns the favor by threatening Clodsire and Toxapex, which can threaten Coalossal. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break opposing Ceruledge's Focus Sash. In exchange, Glimmora eliminates physical walls like Quagsire and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor. Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker that can force progress with Salt Cure in matchups against defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian Goodra, and Galarian Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine after Stealth Rock, entry hazard chip and Urshifu-R, which can threaten Garganacl. Alolan Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor and Corviknight. Diancie can set up Stealth Rock while also OHKOing Chien-Pao with Body Press and Kommo-o with Moonblast if Glimmora is not running Dazzling Gleam.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Choice Specs can be run over Choice Scarf to become a fierce wallbreaker, taking on Toxapex, Rotom-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However, this makes Glimmora vulnerable to faster threats, such as Greninja, Iron Valiant, and Chien-Pao, and will likely require some other form of speed control. Spikes can be used to allow Glimmora to rack up entry hazard damage on forced switches against foes such as Iron Valiant and Quagsire.

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Glimmora

[SET]
Glimmora @ Choice Scarf / Choice Specs (You include Specs in OO so don't include in the set)
Name: Choice Attacker
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Energy Ball
- Earth Power
- Dazzling Gleam
- Sludge Wave / Mortal Spin (added a space) / Power Gem

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its decent Special Attack, (RC) and Speed to take on threats like non-scarf Capitalize Urshifu-R, Great Tusk, and non-Air Balloon Heatran. Toxic Debris allows Glimmora to set up Toxic Spikes after a physical attack to help poison oppeonents on a switch in. Fluff imo Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like non-scarf Capitalize Greninja, Quagsire, and the aforementioned non-scarf Capitalize Great Tusk. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, Iron Moth, and Heavy Duty Boots Sneasler. Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting Types like Sableye, Hydreigon, Kommo-o, and Urshifu-S. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as non-scarf Capitalize Iron Valiant, Clefable, and Ogerpon-Wellspring. Mortal Spin is an option to run over Sludge Wave to help remove hazards and potentially poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run as well to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, and Ogerpon-Hearthflame 252 SpA Glimmora Power Gem vs. 0 HP / 4 SpD Ogerpon-Hearthflame: 270-320 (89.7 - 106.3%) -- 37.5% chance to OHKO (I feel Ogerpon-H is a better mention in Sludge Wave, as it's a guaranteed OHKO).

Tyranitar provides sand, Psychic immunity due to its Dark typing and taking on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Zoroark-Hisui. Mention sand boosting Special Defense, which allows Glimmora to survive some stuff like Specs Dragapult's Draco Meteor In return Glimmora takes out Hisuian-Samurrott, Gastrodon, and Breloom for Tyranitar. Due to being quad a 4x weakness to Ground-Types Swords Dance Ogerpon-Cornerstone after a boost can eliminate Ursaluna-Bloodmoon, non-scarf Capitalize Urshifu-R, and Landorus. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-Cornerstone, handling threats such as Iron Valiant, and Kleavor. Glimmora also helps if your using Mortal Spin to remove hazards to prevent Ogerpon-Cornerstone's Sturdy from breaking. Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker dealing with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal is another option helping Glimmora remove hazards, and help hazard stack for the team with spikes Spikes. Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, Chien-Pao, and Meowscarada IMO Scarf Glimmora shouldn't really be scared of Meow since non-Scarf variants you immediately OHKO while Scarf only 2HKOes you and you OHKO back. Glimmora threatens the aforesaid common Ground-, and Water-types that would harm Coalossal. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break Foucs Sash users like Ceruledge. Sand Rush Lycanroc is good speed control for Rock teams being able to outspeed and eliminate Cloyster after a shell smash, Shell Smash and non-Scarf Enamorus for Glimmora. In exchange Glimmora terminates physcial walls like Dondozo 252 SpA Glimmora Energy Ball vs. 252 HP / 252+ SpD Dondozo: 186-220 (36.9 - 43.6%) -- 99.5% chance to 3HKO after Leftovers recovery, and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor. Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker with Salt Cure forcing progress in stall matches against defensive pokemons like Toxapex, Hisuian-Goodra, and Galarian-Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine, and both Urshifus which would hurt Garganacl. Alolan-Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor, and Corviknight. Mention Diancie as well, being able to Stealth Rock while also OHKOing Chien-Pao and Body Press. It also has the potential to sweep with Diamond Storm + Body Press against slower mons like Empoleon and Gambit

[Strategy Options]
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[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Choice Specs can be run over Scarf to become a fierce wall breaker taking on Toxapex, Rotoem-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However keep in mind that you are lacking speed control and being vulnerable to faster threats Greninja, Iron Valiant and Chien-Pao. Air Balloon combined with Corrosion, and Toxic can be ran as a soft Ground immunity for the team and being able to poison Steel- and Poison-types. Running Air Balloon will have similar issues with the Choice Specs options due to the lack of speed.

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Glimmora

[SET]
Glimmora @ Choice Scarf / Choice Specs (You include Specs in OO so don't include in the set)
Name: Choice Attacker
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Energy Ball
- Earth Power
- Dazzling Gleam
- Sludge Wave / Mortal Spin (added a space) / Power Gem

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its decent Special Attack, (RC) and Speed to take on threats like non-scarf Capitalize Urshifu-R, Great Tusk, and non-Air Balloon Heatran. Toxic Debris allows Glimmora to set up Toxic Spikes after a physical attack to help poison oppeonents on a switch in. Fluff imo Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like non-scarf Capitalize Greninja, Quagsire, and the aforementioned non-scarf Capitalize Great Tusk. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, Iron Moth, and Heavy Duty Boots Sneasler. Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting Types like Sableye, Hydreigon, Kommo-o, and Urshifu-S. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as non-scarf Capitalize Iron Valiant, Clefable, and Ogerpon-Wellspring. Mortal Spin is an option to run over Sludge Wave to help remove hazards and potentially poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run as well to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, and Ogerpon-Hearthflame 252 SpA Glimmora Power Gem vs. 0 HP / 4 SpD Ogerpon-Hearthflame: 270-320 (89.7 - 106.3%) -- 37.5% chance to OHKO (I feel Ogerpon-H is a better mention in Sludge Wave, as it's a guaranteed OHKO).

Tyranitar provides sand, Psychic immunity due to its Dark typing and taking on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Zoroark-Hisui. Mention sand boosting Special Defense, which allows Glimmora to survive some stuff like Specs Dragapult's Draco Meteor In return Glimmora takes out Hisuian-Samurrott, Gastrodon, and Breloom for Tyranitar. Due to being quad a 4x weakness to Ground-Types Swords Dance Ogerpon-Cornerstone after a boost can eliminate Ursaluna-Bloodmoon, non-scarf Capitalize Urshifu-R, and Landorus. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-Cornerstone, handling threats such as Iron Valiant, and Kleavor. Glimmora also helps if your using Mortal Spin to remove hazards to prevent Ogerpon-Cornerstone's Sturdy from breaking. Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker dealing with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal is another option helping Glimmora remove hazards, and help hazard stack for the team with spikes Spikes. Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, Chien-Pao, and Meowscarada IMO Scarf Glimmora shouldn't really be scared of Meow since non-Scarf variants you immediately OHKO while Scarf only 2HKOes you and you OHKO back. Glimmora threatens the aforesaid common Ground-, and Water-types that would harm Coalossal. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break Foucs Sash users like Ceruledge. Sand Rush Lycanroc is good speed control for Rock teams being able to outspeed and eliminate Cloyster after a shell smash, Shell Smash and non-Scarf Enamorus for Glimmora. In exchange Glimmora terminates physcial walls like Dondozo 252 SpA Glimmora Energy Ball vs. 252 HP / 252+ SpD Dondozo: 186-220 (36.9 - 43.6%) -- 99.5% chance to 3HKO after Leftovers recovery, and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor. Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker with Salt Cure forcing progress in stall matches against defensive pokemons like Toxapex, Hisuian-Goodra, and Galarian-Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine, and both Urshifus which would hurt Garganacl. Alolan-Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor, and Corviknight. Mention Diancie as well, being able to Stealth Rock while also OHKOing Chien-Pao and Body Press. It also has the potential to sweep with Diamond Storm + Body Press against slower mons like Empoleon and Gambit

[Strategy Options]
==================================================================================================================================================================================================
[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
============= (fixed formatting)
Choice Specs can be run over Scarf to become a fierce wall breaker taking on Toxapex, Rotoem-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However keep in mind that you are lacking speed control and being vulnerable to faster threats Greninja, Iron Valiant and Chien-Pao. Air Balloon combined with Corrosion, and Toxic can be ran as a soft Ground immunity for the team and being able to poison Steel- and Poison-types. Running Air Balloon will have similar issues with the Choice Specs options due to the lack of speed.

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[SET]
Glimmora @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Attacker Choice Scarf (Rock)
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk (since Mortal Spin isn't default)
Timid Nature
- Energy Ball
- Earth Power
- Dazzling Gleam Sludge Wave
- Sludge Wave Dazzling Gleam / Mortal Spin / Power Gem

(Really think Sludge Wave is one of the most important reasons to run this set as it lets you outrun and OHKO Oger-H, Oger-W, and Lilli-H which is massive for Rock, so I have put it as a mandatory move > Dazzling Gleam. Reorder paragraph below to reflect this)

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its decent high (130 Sp Atk is nothing to sneeze at) Special Attack, and Speed to take on threats like non-Scarf Urshifu-R, Great Tusk, and non-Air Balloon Heatran (drop Heatran and Tusk here and put Oger-W and Lilligant-H, Scarf Glimm is insecure against both and Air Balloon is better and taking them on). Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like non-Scarf Greninja, Quagsire, and the aforementioned non-Scarf Great Tusk. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, Iron Moth, and Sneasler (mention Heatran here instead). Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting Types like Sableye, Hydreigon, Kommo-o, and Urshifu-S. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as non-Scarf Iron Valiant, Clefable, Ogerpon-W, and Ogerpon-H (drop Clef and add Hisuian Lilligant here). Mortal Spin is an option to run over Sludge Wave Dazzling Gleam to help remove hazards and poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run as well to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, and Choice Scarf Kleavor (and Volcarona).

Tyranitar provides sand, Psychic immunity due to its Dark typing (fluff) and taking takes on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Zoroark-Hisui. Tyranitar providing sand also allows Glimmora to survive a Specs Draco Meteor from Dragapult due to the Special Defense boost. In return Glimmora takes out Hisuian-Samurrott, Gastrodon, and Breloom (Breloom is a little iffy because of Mach Punch, Gastrodon is a poor example because it actually lives Energy Ball. Sub for Quag and something like Oger-W) for Tyranitar. Due to a 4x weakness to Ground-Types (doesn't make too much sense; try something like "Oger-C can compensate for Glimmora's Ground weakness and after a boost...") Swords Dance Ogerpon-Cornerstone after a boost can eliminate Ursaluna-Bloodmoon, non-Scarf Urshifu-R (Oger-C loses to SD Urshifu-R; substitute for Dragonite), and Landorus. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-Cornerstone, by handling threats such as Iron Valiant, and Kleavor (Kleavor only if using Power Gem. Lilligant-H more important). Glimmora also helps if your using Mortal Spin to remove hazards to prevent Ogerpon-Cornerstone's Sturdy from breaking. Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker dealing with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal is another option helping Glimmora remove hazards (rephrase to say something like Coalossal can serve as entry hazard control to allow Glimmora to drop Mortal Spin), and help hazard stack for the team with Spikes (Spikes help Scarf Glimm clean late-game). Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, and Chien-Pao (and Corv). Glimmora threatens the aforesaid common Ground-, and Water-types that would harm Coalossal. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break Foucs Sash users like Ceruledge's Focus Sash. Sand Rush Lycanroc is good speed control for Rock teams being able to outspeed and eliminate Cloyster after a Shell Smash, and non-Scarf Enamorus for Glimmora (I would remove this part about Lycanroc, running that + a Scarfer feels excessive in terms of speed control. Enamorus almost always run Scarf these days too). In exchange Glimmora terminates physcial walls like Quagsire and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor (this needs to be bundled with the other sentence about Kleavor). Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker with Salt Cure forcing progress in stall matches matchups against defensive pokemons Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian-Goodra, and Galarian-Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine (OHKOes with Energy Ball after Stealth Rock), and both Urshifus which would hurt Garganacl. Alolan-Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor, and Corviknight. Diancie can set up Stealth Rock while also OHKOing Chien-Pao with Body Press. Diancie also has the potential to sweep with Diamond Storm + Body Press against slower threats like Empoleon and Kingambit. (I don't think Diancie is secure enough against either of these to plan around, Diancie is good for Scarf Glimm because it can take on stuff like Kommo-o if dropping Dazzling)

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
===============
Choice Specs can be run over Scarf to become a fierce wall breaker taking on Toxapex, Rotem-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However keep in mind that you are lacking speed control and being this makes Glimmora vulnerable to faster threats Greninja, Iron Valiant and Chien-Pao (and will likely require you to run some other form of speed control). Air Balloon combined with Corrosion and Toxic can be ran as a soft Ground immunity for the team and being able to poison Steel- and Poison-types. Running Air Balloon will have similar issues with the Choice Specs options due to the lack of speed. (Balloon is a different set entirely) (Spikes can be used to allow Glimmora to rack up hazards on forced switches against foes such as Iron Valiant and Quagsire)

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[SET]
Glimmora @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Attacker Choice Scarf (Rock)
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk (since Mortal Spin isn't default)
Timid Nature
- Energy Ball
- Earth Power
- Dazzling Gleam Sludge Wave
- Sludge Wave Dazzling Gleam / Mortal Spin / Power Gem

(Really think Sludge Wave is one of the most important reasons to run this set as it lets you outrun and OHKO Oger-H, Oger-W, and Lilli-H which is massive for Rock, so I have put it as a mandatory move > Dazzling Gleam. Reorder paragraph below to reflect this)

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its decent high (130 Sp Atk is nothing to sneeze at) Special Attack, and Speed to take on threats like non-Scarf Urshifu-R, Great Tusk, and non-Air Balloon Heatran (drop Heatran and Tusk here and put Oger-W and Lilligant-H, Scarf Glimm is insecure against both and Air Balloon is better and taking them on). Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like non-Scarf Greninja, Quagsire, and the aforementioned non-Scarf Great Tusk. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, Iron Moth, and Sneasler (mention Heatran here instead). Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting Types like Sableye, Hydreigon, Kommo-o, and Urshifu-S. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as non-Scarf Iron Valiant, Clefable, Ogerpon-W, and Ogerpon-H (drop Clef and add Hisuian Lilligant here). Mortal Spin is an option to run over Sludge Wave Dazzling Gleam to help remove hazards and poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run as well to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, and Choice Scarf Kleavor (and Volcarona).

Tyranitar provides sand, Psychic immunity due to its Dark typing (fluff) and taking takes on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Zoroark-Hisui. Tyranitar providing sand also allows Glimmora to survive a Specs Draco Meteor from Dragapult due to the Special Defense boost. In return Glimmora takes out Hisuian-Samurrott, Gastrodon, and Breloom (Breloom is a little iffy because of Mach Punch, Gastrodon is a poor example because it actually lives Energy Ball. Sub for Quag and something like Oger-W) for Tyranitar. Due to a 4x weakness to Ground-Types (doesn't make too much sense; try something like "Oger-C can compensate for Glimmora's Ground weakness and after a boost...") Swords Dance Ogerpon-Cornerstone after a boost can eliminate Ursaluna-Bloodmoon, non-Scarf Urshifu-R (Oger-C loses to SD Urshifu-R; substitute for Dragonite), and Landorus. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-Cornerstone, by handling threats such as Iron Valiant, and Kleavor (Kleavor only if using Power Gem. Lilligant-H more important). Glimmora also helps if your using Mortal Spin to remove hazards to prevent Ogerpon-Cornerstone's Sturdy from breaking. Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker dealing with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal is another option helping Glimmora remove hazards (rephrase to say something like Coalossal can serve as entry hazard control to allow Glimmora to drop Mortal Spin), and help hazard stack for the team with Spikes (Spikes help Scarf Glimm clean late-game). Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, and Chien-Pao (and Corv). Glimmora threatens the aforesaid common Ground-, and Water-types that would harm Coalossal. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break Foucs Sash users like Ceruledge's Focus Sash. Sand Rush Lycanroc is good speed control for Rock teams being able to outspeed and eliminate Cloyster after a Shell Smash, and non-Scarf Enamorus for Glimmora (I would remove this part about Lycanroc, running that + a Scarfer feels excessive in terms of speed control. Enamorus almost always run Scarf these days too). In exchange Glimmora terminates physcial walls like Quagsire and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor (this needs to be bundled with the other sentence about Kleavor). Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker with Salt Cure forcing progress in stall matches matchups against defensive pokemons Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian-Goodra, and Galarian-Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine (OHKOes with Energy Ball after Stealth Rock), and both Urshifus which would hurt Garganacl. Alolan-Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor, and Corviknight. Diancie can set up Stealth Rock while also OHKOing Chien-Pao with Body Press. Diancie also has the potential to sweep with Diamond Storm + Body Press against slower threats like Empoleon and Kingambit. (I don't think Diancie is secure enough against either of these to plan around, Diancie is good for Scarf Glimm because it can take on stuff like Kommo-o if dropping Dazzling)

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
===============
Choice Specs can be run over Scarf to become a fierce wall breaker taking on Toxapex, Rotem-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However keep in mind that you are lacking speed control and being this makes Glimmora vulnerable to faster threats Greninja, Iron Valiant and Chien-Pao (and will likely require you to run some other form of speed control). Air Balloon combined with Corrosion and Toxic can be ran as a soft Ground immunity for the team and being able to poison Steel- and Poison-types. Running Air Balloon will have similar issues with the Choice Specs options due to the lack of speed. (Balloon is a different set entirely) (Spikes can be used to allow Glimmora to rack up hazards on forced switches against foes such as Iron Valiant and Quagsire)

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(Note that regional formes are not hyphenated; e.g., Hisuian Lilligant is correct, Hisuian-Lilligant is not. Please correct.)

Glimmora @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Scarf (Rock)
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Energy Ball
- Earth Power
- Sludge Wave
- Dazzling Gleam / Mortal Spin / Power Gem
- Earth Power
- Sludge Wave
- Dazzling Gleam
- Energy Ball / Mortal Spin / Power Gem
(Was recommended to format moveset as so because Ogerpon-C can compensate for lack of Energy Ball, please make sure first paragraph follows this order. Apologies for confusion)

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its high Special Attack, and Speed to take on threats like non-Scarf Urshifu-R, Ogerpon-W, and Liligant-H. Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like non-Scarf Greninja, Quagsire, and non-Scarf Great Tusk. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Iron Moth, and Sneasler. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as non-Scarf Iron Valiant, Hisuian-Liligant, Ogerpon-W, and Ogerpon-H. Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting Types like Sableye, Hydreigon, Kommo-o, and Urshifu-S. Mortal Spin is an option to run over Dazzling Gleam to help remove hazards and poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run as well to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, Choice Scarf Kleavor, and Volcarona.

Tyranitar provides sand, a Psychic immunity and takeson takes on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Zoroark-Hisui Hisuian Zoroark. Tyranitar providing sand also allows Glimmora to survive a Specs Draco Meteor from Dragapult due to the Special Defense boost (and 2HKO with Dazzling). In return Glimmora takes out Hisuian-Samurrott, Quagsire, and Ogerpon-W for Tyranitar. Ogerpon-C can compensate for Glimmora's Ground weakness and after a boost can eliminate Ursaluna-Bloodmoon Ursaluna-B, Dragonite, and Landorus. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-C by handling threats such as Iron Valiant, Liligant-H, and Kleavor if using Power Gem. Glimmora also helps if using can further aid Ogerpon-C with Mortal Spin to remove by removing hazards to, helping to prevent Ogerpon-C's Sturdy from breaking (reworded slightly for clarity). Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker dealing with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal can serve as entry hazard control to allow Glimmora to drop Mortal Spin; and help Coalossal can additionally hazard stack for support the team with Spikes, facilitating Glimmora's cleaning. Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, Chien-Pao, and Corviknight. Glimmora returns the favor by threatening threatens the aforesaid common Ground-, and Water-types that would harm Coalossal. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break Ceruledge's Foucs Focus Sash. In exchange Glimmora terminates ("terminates" feels strange here; "eliminates"?) physcial walls like Quagsire and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor. Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker with Salt Cure forcing that with Salt Cure can force progress in matchups against defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian-Goodra, and Galarian-Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine after Stealth Rock, and both Urshifus which would hurt Garganacl. Alolan-Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor, and Corviknight. Diancie can set up Stealth Rock while also OHKOing Chien-Pao with Body Press, and Kommo-o with Moonblast if dropping Dazzling Gleam.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
===============
Choice Specs can be run over Scarf to become a fierce wall breaker taking on Toxapex, Rotem-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However keep in mind that this makes Glimmora vulnerable to faster threats such as Greninja, Iron Valiant and Chien-Pao and will likely require you to run some other form of speed control. Spikes can be used to allow Glimmora to rack up hazards on forced switches against foes such as Iron Valiant and Quagsire.

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(Note that regional formes are not hyphenated; e.g., Hisuian Lilligant is correct, Hisuian-Lilligant is not. Please correct.)

Glimmora @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Scarf (Rock)
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Energy Ball
- Earth Power
- Sludge Wave
- Dazzling Gleam / Mortal Spin / Power Gem
- Earth Power
- Sludge Wave
- Dazzling Gleam
- Energy Ball / Mortal Spin / Power Gem
(Was recommended to format moveset as so because Ogerpon-C can compensate for lack of Energy Ball, please make sure first paragraph follows this order. Apologies for confusion)

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its high Special Attack, and Speed to take on threats like non-Scarf Urshifu-R, Ogerpon-W, and Liligant-H. Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like non-Scarf Greninja, Quagsire, and non-Scarf Great Tusk. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Iron Moth, and Sneasler. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as non-Scarf Iron Valiant, Hisuian-Liligant, Ogerpon-W, and Ogerpon-H. Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting Types like Sableye, Hydreigon, Kommo-o, and Urshifu-S. Mortal Spin is an option to run over Dazzling Gleam to help remove hazards and poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run as well to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, Choice Scarf Kleavor, and Volcarona.

Tyranitar provides sand, a Psychic immunity and takeson takes on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Zoroark-Hisui Hisuian Zoroark. Tyranitar providing sand also allows Glimmora to survive a Specs Draco Meteor from Dragapult due to the Special Defense boost (and 2HKO with Dazzling). In return Glimmora takes out Hisuian-Samurrott, Quagsire, and Ogerpon-W for Tyranitar. Ogerpon-C can compensate for Glimmora's Ground weakness and after a boost can eliminate Ursaluna-Bloodmoon Ursaluna-B, Dragonite, and Landorus. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-C by handling threats such as Iron Valiant, Liligant-H, and Kleavor if using Power Gem. Glimmora also helps if using can further aid Ogerpon-C with Mortal Spin to remove by removing hazards to, helping to prevent Ogerpon-C's Sturdy from breaking (reworded slightly for clarity). Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker dealing with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal can serve as entry hazard control to allow Glimmora to drop Mortal Spin; and help Coalossal can additionally hazard stack for support the team with Spikes, facilitating Glimmora's cleaning. Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, Chien-Pao, and Corviknight. Glimmora returns the favor by threatening threatens the aforesaid common Ground-, and Water-types that would harm Coalossal. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break Ceruledge's Foucs Focus Sash. In exchange Glimmora terminates ("terminates" feels strange here; "eliminates"?) physcial walls like Quagsire and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor. Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker with Salt Cure forcing that with Salt Cure can force progress in matchups against defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian-Goodra, and Galarian-Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine after Stealth Rock, and both Urshifus which would hurt Garganacl. Alolan-Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor, and Corviknight. Diancie can set up Stealth Rock while also OHKOing Chien-Pao with Body Press, and Kommo-o with Moonblast if dropping Dazzling Gleam.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
===============
Choice Specs can be run over Scarf to become a fierce wall breaker taking on Toxapex, Rotem-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However keep in mind that this makes Glimmora vulnerable to faster threats such as Greninja, Iron Valiant and Chien-Pao and will likely require you to run some other form of speed control. Spikes can be used to allow Glimmora to rack up hazards on forced switches against foes such as Iron Valiant and Quagsire.

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Glimmora @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Scarf (Rock)
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Earth Power
- Sludge Wave
- Dazzling Gleam
- Energy Ball / Mortal Spin / Power Gem

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its high Special Attack,(RC) and Speed to take on threats like non-Scarf Urshifu-R, Ogerpon-W, and Hisuian Liligant Ogerpon-W, Hisuian Lilligant, and non-Choice Scarf Urshifu-R reordered because the previous wording implied that ogerpon and lilligant run scarf. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Iron Moth, and Sneasler. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which that can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as non-Scarf Iron Valiant, Hisuian-Liligant, Ogerpon-W, and Ogerpon-H Hisuian Lilligant, Ogerpon-W, Ogerpon-H, and non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant. Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting Types Fighting-types like Sableye, Hydreigon, and Kommo-o. Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like non-Scarf Greninja, Quagsire, and non-Scarf Great Tusk Quagsire and non-Choice Scarf Greninja and Great Tusk. Mortal Spin is an option to can be run over Energy Ball to help remove entry hazards and poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run as well instead to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, Choice Scarf Kleavor, and Volcarona Volcarona, and Choice Scarf Kleavor.

Tyranitar provides sand,(RC) and a Psychic immunity and takes on ,(AC) while also taking on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Hisuian Zoroark. Tyranitar providing sand also allows Glimmora to Thanks to the sand Tyranitar provides, Glimmora can reworded so the start of the sentence wouldn't sound repetitive with the first sentence survive a Choice Specs Draco Meteor from Dragapult due to the Special Defense boost and 2HKO it with Dazzling Gleam. In return,(AC) Glimmora takes out Hisuian Samurrott, Quagsire, and Ogerpon-W for Tyranitar. Ogerpon-C can compensate for Glimmora's Ground weakness,(AC) and after a boost setup,(AC) it can eliminate Ursaluna-B, Dragonite, and Landorus. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-C by handling threats such as Iron Valiant, Liligant-H, and Kleavor if using Power Gem Kleavor if running Power Gem, Iron Valiant, and Hisuian Lilligant. Glimmora can further aid Ogerpon-C with Mortal Spin by removing entry hazards,(RC) helping to to help prevent Ogerpon-C's Sturdy from breaking. Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker dealing that can deal with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal can serve as entry hazard control to allow Glimmora to drop Mortal Spin; Coalossal it can additionally support the team with Spikes, facilitating Glimmora's cleaning. Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, Chien-Pao, and Corviknight. Glimmora returns the favor by threatening the aforesaid common Ground-, and Water-types that would harm Coalossal Clodsire and Toxapex, which can threaten Coalossal i assume this is what you meant by "the aforesaid common Ground- and Water-types"; i specified them here as the last time they were mentioned was several sentences ago before coalossal was even mentioned. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break opposing Ceruledge's Focus Sash. In exchange,(AC) Glimmora eliminates physcial walls like Quagsire and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor. Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker that with Salt Cure can force progress in matchups against defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian-Goodra, and Galarian-Slowking can force progress with Salt Cure in matchups against defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian Goodra, and Galarian Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine after Stealth Rock, entry hazard chip it doesn't matter which hazard in this case and Urshifu-R,(AC) which would hurt can threaten Garganacl. Alolan-(RH)Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor,(RC) and Corviknight. Diancie can set up Stealth Rock,(AC) while also OHKOing Chien-Pao with Body Press,(RC) and Kommo-o with Moonblast if dropping Glimmora is not running Dazzling Gleam.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
===============

Rock
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Choice Specs can be run over Choice Scarf to become a fierce wall breaker wallbreaker,(AC) taking on Toxapex, Rotem-W Rotom-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However,(AC) keep in mind that this makes Glimmora vulnerable to faster threats such as Greninja, Iron Valiant,(AC) and Chien-Pao and will likely require you to run some other form of speed control. Spikes can be used to allow Glimmora to rack up entry hazards on forced switches against foes such as Iron Valiant and Quagsire.

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Glimmora @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Scarf (Rock)
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Earth Power
- Sludge Wave
- Dazzling Gleam
- Energy Ball / Mortal Spin / Power Gem

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its high Special Attack,(RC) and Speed to take on threats like non-Scarf Urshifu-R, Ogerpon-W, and Hisuian Liligant Ogerpon-W, Hisuian Lilligant, and non-Choice Scarf Urshifu-R reordered because the previous wording implied that ogerpon and lilligant run scarf. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Iron Moth, and Sneasler. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which that can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as non-Scarf Iron Valiant, Hisuian-Liligant, Ogerpon-W, and Ogerpon-H Hisuian Lilligant, Ogerpon-W, Ogerpon-H, and non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant. Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting Types Fighting-types like Sableye, Hydreigon, and Kommo-o. Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like non-Scarf Greninja, Quagsire, and non-Scarf Great Tusk Quagsire and non-Choice Scarf Greninja and Great Tusk. Mortal Spin is an option to can be run over Energy Ball to help remove entry hazards and poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run as well instead to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, Choice Scarf Kleavor, and Volcarona Volcarona, and Choice Scarf Kleavor.

Tyranitar provides sand,(RC) and a Psychic immunity and takes on ,(AC) while also taking on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Hisuian Zoroark. Tyranitar providing sand also allows Glimmora to Thanks to the sand Tyranitar provides, Glimmora can reworded so the start of the sentence wouldn't sound repetitive with the first sentence survive a Choice Specs Draco Meteor from Dragapult due to the Special Defense boost and 2HKO it with Dazzling Gleam. In return,(AC) Glimmora takes out Hisuian Samurrott, Quagsire, and Ogerpon-W for Tyranitar. Ogerpon-C can compensate for Glimmora's Ground weakness,(AC) and after a boost setup,(AC) it can eliminate Ursaluna-B, Dragonite, and Landorus. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-C by handling threats such as Iron Valiant, Liligant-H, and Kleavor if using Power Gem Kleavor if running Power Gem, Iron Valiant, and Hisuian Lilligant. Glimmora can further aid Ogerpon-C with Mortal Spin by removing entry hazards,(RC) helping to to help prevent Ogerpon-C's Sturdy from breaking. Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker dealing that can deal with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal can serve as entry hazard control to allow Glimmora to drop Mortal Spin; Coalossal it can additionally support the team with Spikes, facilitating Glimmora's cleaning. Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, Chien-Pao, and Corviknight. Glimmora returns the favor by threatening the aforesaid common Ground-, and Water-types that would harm Coalossal Clodsire and Toxapex, which can threaten Coalossal i assume this is what you meant by "the aforesaid common Ground- and Water-types"; i specified them here as the last time they were mentioned was several sentences ago before coalossal was even mentioned. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break opposing Ceruledge's Focus Sash. In exchange,(AC) Glimmora eliminates physcial walls like Quagsire and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor. Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker that with Salt Cure can force progress in matchups against defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian-Goodra, and Galarian-Slowking can force progress with Salt Cure in matchups against defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian Goodra, and Galarian Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine after Stealth Rock, entry hazard chip it doesn't matter which hazard in this case and Urshifu-R,(AC) which would hurt can threaten Garganacl. Alolan-(RH)Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor,(RC) and Corviknight. Diancie can set up Stealth Rock,(AC) while also OHKOing Chien-Pao with Body Press,(RC) and Kommo-o with Moonblast if dropping Glimmora is not running Dazzling Gleam.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
===============

Rock
--------
Choice Specs can be run over Choice Scarf to become a fierce wall breaker wallbreaker,(AC) taking on Toxapex, Rotem-W Rotom-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However,(AC) keep in mind that this makes Glimmora vulnerable to faster threats such as Greninja, Iron Valiant,(AC) and Chien-Pao and will likely require you to run some other form of speed control. Spikes can be used to allow Glimmora to rack up entry hazards on forced switches against foes such as Iron Valiant and Quagsire.

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If while means while at the same time, it doesn't need a comma preceding it. If while means whereas, it needs a comma preceding it.

There's a few smaller changes you made that are subjective here that don't change the overall meaning, so be careful about that.

Good job overall :)

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Rock

[SET]
Glimmora @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Scarf (Rock)
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Earth Power
- Sludge Wave
- Dazzling Gleam
- Energy Ball / Mortal Spin / Power Gem

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its high Special Attack and Speed to take on threats like Ogerpon-W, Hisuian Lilligant, and non-Choice Scarf Urshifu-R. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Iron Moth, and Sneasler. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which that can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as Hisuian Lilligant, Ogerpon-W, Ogerpon-H, and non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant. Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting-types like Sableye, Hydreigon, and Kommo-o. Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like Quagsire and non-Choice Scarf Greninja and Great Tusk. Mortal Spin can be run over Energy Ball to help remove entry hazards and poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run instead to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, Volcarona, and Choice Scarf Kleavor.

Tyranitar provides sand and a Psychic immunity (rc) while also taking on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Hisuian Zoroark. Thanks to the sand Tyranitar provides, Glimmora can survive a Choice Specs Draco Meteor from Dragapult due to the Special Defense boost and 2HKO it with Dazzling Gleam. In return, Glimmora also adding this since you mention it taking out another mon in the previous sentence takes out Hisuian Samurrott Samurott, Quagsire, and Ogerpon-W for Tyranitar. Ogerpon-C can compensate for Glimmora's Ground weakness, and, (ac) after setup, it can eliminate Ursaluna-B, Dragonite, and Landorus Landorus if you mean base, Landorus-T if you mean Therian, both Landorus formes if you mean both. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-C by handling threats such as Kleavor if when running Power Gem, Iron Valiant, and Hisuian Lilligant. Glimmora can further aid Ogerpon-C with Mortal Spin by removing entry hazards to help prevent Ogerpon-C's Sturdy from breaking. Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker that can deal with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal can serve as entry hazard control to allow Glimmora to drop Mortal Spin; it can additionally support the team with Spikes, facilitating Glimmora's cleaning. Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, Chien-Pao, and Corviknight. Glimmora returns the favor by threatening Clodsire and Toxapex, which can threaten Coalossal. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break opposing Ceruledge's Focus Sash. In exchange, Glimmora eliminates physcial physical walls like Quagsire and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor. Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker that can force progress with Salt Cure in matchups against defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian Goodra, and Galarian Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine after Stealth Rock, entry hazard chip and Urshifu-R, which can threaten Garganacl. Alolan Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor and Corviknight. Diancie can set up Stealth Rock (rc) while also OHKOing Chien-Pao with Body Press and Kommo-o with Moonblast if Glimmora is not running Dazzling Gleam.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
===============

Rock
--------
Choice Specs can be run over Choice Scarf to become a fierce wallbreaker, taking on Toxapex, Rotom-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However, this makes Glimmora vulnerable to faster threats, (ac) such as Greninja, Iron Valiant, and Chien-Pao, (ac) and will likely require some other form of speed control. Spikes can be used to allow Glimmora to rack up entry hazards if you mean damage, change "rack up entry hazards" to "rack up entry hazard damage" on forced switches against foes such as Iron Valiant and Quagsire.

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added both Kinetic1000's and my own credit

when editing in the GP check, check out the video in this post; it's easier than manually editing your own post, since you missed some stuff from the amgp

feedback for amgp

If while means while at the same time, it doesn't need a comma preceding it. If while means whereas, it needs a comma preceding it.

There's a few smaller changes you made that are subjective here that don't change the overall meaning, so be careful about that.

Good job overall :)

flower power

Rock

[SET]
Glimmora @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Scarf (Rock)
Ability: Toxic Debris
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Earth Power
- Sludge Wave
- Dazzling Gleam
- Energy Ball / Mortal Spin / Power Gem

[SET COMMENTS]
Glimmora is a decent Choice Scarf user for Rock teams due to its high Special Attack and Speed to take on threats like Ogerpon-W, Hisuian Lilligant, and non-Choice Scarf Urshifu-R. Earth Power threatens Steel- and Poison-types like Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Iron Moth, and Sneasler. Sludge Wave is a strong STAB move which that can take on Fairy- and Grass-types such as Hisuian Lilligant, Ogerpon-W, Ogerpon-H, and non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant. Dazzling Gleam takes out Dark-, Dragon-, and Fighting-types like Sableye, Hydreigon, and Kommo-o. Energy Ball allows Glimmora to deal with Water- and Ground-types like Quagsire and non-Choice Scarf Greninja and Great Tusk. Mortal Spin can be run over Energy Ball to help remove entry hazards and poison foes in the process. Power Gem can be run instead to deal with Baxcalibur, Chien-Pao, Volcarona, and Choice Scarf Kleavor.

Tyranitar provides sand and a Psychic immunity (rc) while also taking on special attackers for Glimmora such as Spectrier, Espathra, and Hisuian Zoroark. Thanks to the sand Tyranitar provides, Glimmora can survive a Choice Specs Draco Meteor from Dragapult due to the Special Defense boost and 2HKO it with Dazzling Gleam. In return, Glimmora also adding this since you mention it taking out another mon in the previous sentence takes out Hisuian Samurrott Samurott, Quagsire, and Ogerpon-W for Tyranitar. Ogerpon-C can compensate for Glimmora's Ground weakness, and, (ac) after setup, it can eliminate Ursaluna-B, Dragonite, and Landorus Landorus if you mean base, Landorus-T if you mean Therian, both Landorus formes if you mean both. Glimmora aids Ogerpon-C by handling threats such as Kleavor if when running Power Gem, Iron Valiant, and Hisuian Lilligant. Glimmora can further aid Ogerpon-C with Mortal Spin by removing entry hazards to help prevent Ogerpon-C's Sturdy from breaking. Choice Band Hisuian Arcanine is a strong wallbreaker that can deal with Corviknight, Clodsire, and Toxapex. Coalossal can serve as entry hazard control to allow Glimmora to drop Mortal Spin; it can additionally support the team with Spikes, facilitating Glimmora's cleaning. Coalossal also deals with Scizor, Kingambit, Chien-Pao, and Corviknight. Glimmora returns the favor by threatening Clodsire and Toxapex, which can threaten Coalossal. Lead Kleavor can set up Stealth Rock and potentially break opposing Ceruledge's Focus Sash. In exchange, Glimmora eliminates physcial physical walls like Quagsire and non-Air Balloon Heatran for Kleavor. Iron Defense Garganacl is a stallbreaker that can force progress with Salt Cure in matchups against defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Hisuian Goodra, and Galarian Slowking. Glimmora dispatches Choice Band Mamoswine after Stealth Rock, entry hazard chip and Urshifu-R, which can threaten Garganacl. Alolan Golem can trap and eliminate Steel-types like Scizor and Corviknight. Diancie can set up Stealth Rock (rc) while also OHKOing Chien-Pao with Body Press and Kommo-o with Moonblast if Glimmora is not running Dazzling Gleam.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
===============

Rock
--------
Choice Specs can be run over Choice Scarf to become a fierce wallbreaker, taking on Toxapex, Rotom-W, and Ursaluna-B easier. However, this makes Glimmora vulnerable to faster threats, (ac) such as Greninja, Iron Valiant, and Chien-Pao, (ac) and will likely require some other form of speed control. Spikes can be used to allow Glimmora to rack up entry hazards if you mean damage, change "rack up entry hazards" to "rack up entry hazard damage" on forced switches against foes such as Iron Valiant and Quagsire.

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https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp611.637295/
Rock Analysis By:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp611.637295/
Quality Checks By:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/captaindaimyo.602431/
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Grammar Check By:
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Implemented ty ken :D