Monotype Maushold

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[SET]
Maushold @ Wide Lens
Name: Tidy Up Sweeper
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Tidy Up
- Population Bomb
- Bite
- Encore / Low Kick / Play Rough

[SET DETAILS]
Tidy Up Maushold is a good setup sweeper for Normal teams, as it is able to outspeed and take out threats like non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, non-Iron Defense Zamazenta, and Urshifu-R. At +1 Attack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move, taking out a plethora of threats not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like Dragapult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves such as locking Corviknight into Defog and Kingambit into Sucker Punch; this allows Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Kingambit, Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Hydreigon, Sableye on a switch in, and unboosted Roaring Moon, but running it leaves Maushold vulnerable to Kingambit. Wide Lens is the best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great teammate for Maushold, providing a Fighting immunity while also fooling its foes due to Illusion. It also takes out physically bulky Pokemon like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast and can use Trick to lock walls like Sableye into undesirable moves by giving them Choice Specs, which eases Maushold's sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps against potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides entry hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the Fighting matchup by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. It also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep, and sets up Psychic Terrain so that Maushold does not fear revenge killing attempts from the likes of Kingambit and Keldeo. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky teammate, taking out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Skarmory, and Dragonite for Maushold. Blissey is an amazing special wall, tanking special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave. It also provides hazard support with Stealth Rock, which gives Maushold chance to OHKO Gliscor.

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[SET]
Maushold @ Wide Lens
Name: Tidy Up sweeper
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Tidy Up
- Population Bomb
- Bite
- Encore / Low Kick / Play Rough

[SET DETAILS]
Maushold paired with Tidy Up, is a good set up sweeper for Normal teams being as it is able to out speed and take out threats like mix (i would just say non scarf? cuz someone whos new reading this might take it at face value and assume if its not mixed then its not outspeeding or something, unless theres a specific reason you mentioned mixed in particular then my bad!!) Iron Valiant, unboosted Roaring Moon, and Urshifu-R. At +1 attack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move being able to take out a plethora of threats if not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows for Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like Dragpult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves like such as Corviknight using Defog or Kingambit using Sucker Punch; This allows for Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Sableye on a switch in, Hydreigon, and unboosted Roaring Moon. But doing so, leaves you vulnerable to Sucker Punch from Kingambit. Wide Lens is the guaranteed best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great team mate for maushold, providing fighting immunity while also being able to fool its foes due to Illusion. Hisuian Zoroark also takes out physical walls like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast. Furthermore, Hisuian Zoroark locks walls like Sableye due to Trick (would reword this to specify if it tricks a choice item), which eases Maushold sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao, and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the fighting matchup, by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. Indeedee also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky team mate for Maushold, being able to take out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Gliscor, and Dragonite for Maushold (i would personally mention moltres over gliscor cuz +1 pop bomb owns glisc, and moltres is becoming more popular and can easily fish for flame body, though neko will prob give more insight on this when she sees it). Blissey is a amazing special wall being able to tank special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave.
trial qc! looks slay regardless :3
Neko
 

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[SET]
Maushold @ Wide Lens
Name: Tidy Up sweeper
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Tidy Up
- Population Bomb
- Bite
- Encore / Low Kick / Play Rough

[SET DETAILS]
Maushold paired with Tidy Up, is a good set up sweeper for Normal teams being as it is able to out speed and take out threats like mix (i would just say non scarf? cuz someone whos new reading this might take it at face value and assume if its not mixed then its not outspeeding or something, unless theres a specific reason you mentioned mixed in particular then my bad!!) Iron Valiant, unboosted Roaring Moon, and Urshifu-R. At +1 attack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move being able to take out a plethora of threats if not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows for Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like Dragpult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves like such as Corviknight using Defog or Kingambit using Sucker Punch; This allows for Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Sableye on a switch in, Hydreigon, and unboosted Roaring Moon. But doing so, leaves you vulnerable to Sucker Punch from Kingambit. Wide Lens is the guaranteed best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great team mate for maushold, providing fighting immunity while also being able to fool its foes due to Illusion. Hisuian Zoroark also takes out physical walls like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast. Furthermore, Hisuian Zoroark locks walls like Sableye due to Trick (would reword this to specify if it tricks a choice item), which eases Maushold sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao, and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the fighting matchup, by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. Indeedee also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky team mate for Maushold, being able to take out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Gliscor, and Dragonite for Maushold (i would personally mention moltres over gliscor cuz +1 pop bomb owns glisc, and moltres is becoming more popular and can easily fish for flame body, though neko will prob give more insight on this when she sees it). Blissey is a amazing special wall being able to tank special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave.
trial qc! looks slay regardless :3
Neko
Implemented ty :D
 

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[SET]
Maushold @ Wide Lens
Name: Tidy Up sweeper
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Tidy Up
- Population Bomb
- Bite
- Encore / Low Kick / Play Rough

[SET DETAILS]
Maushold paired with Tidy Up, is a good set up sweeper for Normal teams being as it is able to out speed and take out threats like mix (i would just say non scarf? cuz someone whos new reading this might take it at face value and assume if its not mixed then its not outspeeding or something, unless theres a specific reason you mentioned mixed in particular then my bad!!) Iron Valiant, unboosted Roaring Moon, and Urshifu-R. At +1 attack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move being able to take out a plethora of threats if not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows for Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like Dragpult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves like such as Corviknight using Defog or Kingambit using Sucker Punch; This allows for Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Sableye on a switch in, Hydreigon, and unboosted Roaring Moon. But doing so, leaves you vulnerable to Sucker Punch from Kingambit. Wide Lens is the guaranteed best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great team mate for maushold, providing fighting immunity while also being able to fool its foes due to Illusion. Hisuian Zoroark also takes out physical walls like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast. Furthermore, Hisuian Zoroark locks walls like Sableye due to Trick (would reword this to specify if it tricks a choice item), which eases Maushold sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao, and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the fighting matchup, by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. Indeedee also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky team mate for Maushold, being able to take out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Gliscor, and Dragonite for Maushold (i would personally mention moltres over gliscor cuz +1 pop bomb owns glisc, and moltres is becoming more popular and can easily fish for flame body, though neko will prob give more insight on this when she sees it). Blissey is a amazing special wall being able to tank special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave.
trial qc! looks slay regardless :3
Neko
Approved btw, though
Maushold paired with Tidy Up, is a good set up sweeper for Normal teams as it is able to out speed and take out threats like non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, unboosted Roaring Moon, and Urshifu-R.
Roaring Moon's most common set remains to be Scarf, so RM should probably be swapped for something else here, like killing non-ID Zama, Iron Hands with minimum chip.
moltres is becoming more popular and can easily fish for flame body,
I think Moltres hasn't seen use in a while due to Skarmory's return, so Skarm would be the better mention here [also has Rocky Helm to kill the mouse]

Thankie sasha , you can QC as usual after this >:3
Also thanks boomp for writing this :blobnom:
 

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Maushold paired with Tidy Up, is a good set up sweeper for Normal teams as it is able to out speed and take out threats like non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, non-Iron Defense Zamazenta, and Urshifu-R. At +1 attack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move being able to take out a plethora of threats if not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows for Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like Dragpult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves such as Corviknight using Defog or Kingambit using Sucker Punch; This allows for Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Kingambit, (added it since you mention it later) Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Sableye on a switch in, Hydreigon, and unboosted Roaring Moon. But doing so, leaves Maushold vulnerable to Sucker Punch from Kingambit. Wide Lens is the best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great team mate for maushold, providing fighting immunity while also being able to fool its foes due to Illusion. Hisuian Zoroark also takes out physical walls physically bulky Pokemon (wouldnt call ghold a wall) like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast. Furthermore, Hisuian Zoroark locks walls like Sableye with Choice Specs due to Trick, which eases Maushold sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao, and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the fighting matchup, by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. Indeedee also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep I'd also mention it sets up psy terrain so maushold doesnt fear revenge killing attempts. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky team mate for Maushold, being able to take out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Skarmory, and Dragonite for Maushold. Blissey is a amazing special wall being able to tank special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave. (add stealth rock support)
QC 2/2!
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Maushold paired with Tidy Up, is a good set up sweeper for Normal teams as it is able to out speed and take out threats like non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, non-Iron Defense Zamazenta, and Urshifu-R. At +1 attack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move being able to take out a plethora of threats if not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows for Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like Dragpult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves such as Corviknight using Defog or Kingambit using Sucker Punch; This allows for Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Kingambit, (added it since you mention it later) Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Sableye on a switch in, Hydreigon, and unboosted Roaring Moon. But doing so, leaves Maushold vulnerable to Sucker Punch from Kingambit. Wide Lens is the best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great team mate for maushold, providing fighting immunity while also being able to fool its foes due to Illusion. Hisuian Zoroark also takes out physical walls physically bulky Pokemon (wouldnt call ghold a wall) like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast. Furthermore, Hisuian Zoroark locks walls like Sableye with Choice Specs due to Trick, which eases Maushold sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao, and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the fighting matchup, by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. Indeedee also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep I'd also mention it sets up psy terrain so maushold doesnt fear revenge killing attempts. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky team mate for Maushold, being able to take out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Skarmory, and Dragonite for Maushold. Blissey is a amazing special wall being able to tank special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave. (add stealth rock support)
QC 2/2!
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:sv/maushold:
[SET]
Maushold @ Wide Lens
Name: Tidy Up sweeper
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Tidy Up
- Population Bomb
- Bite
- Encore / Low Kick / Play Rough

[SET DETAILS]
Maushold paired with Tidy Up, (RC) Maushold is a good set upsetup sweeper for Normal teams as it is able to out speedoutspeed and take out threats like non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, non-Iron Defense Zamazenta, and Urshifu-R. At +1 attackAttack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move being able to take out a plethora of threats if not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows for Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like DragpultDragapult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves such as Corviknight using Defog or Kingambit using Sucker Punch; This allows for Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Kingambit, Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Sableye on a switch in, Hydreigon, and unboosted Roaring Moon. (RP), (AC) Butbut doing so, (RC) leaves Maushold vulnerable to Kingambit. Wide Lens is the best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great team mateteammate for mausholdMaushold, providing a fighting immunity while also being able to fool its foes due to Illusion. Hisuian Zoroark also takes out physically bulky Pokemon like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast. Furthermore, Hisuian Zoroark can use Trick to lockslock walls like Sableye with Choice Specs due to Trickinto undesirable moves by giving them Choice Specs, which eases Maushold sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao, (RC) and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides entry hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the fighting matchup, (RC) by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. Indeedee also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep. Furthermore, Indeedee sets up Psychic Terrain so that Maushold does not fear revenge killing attempts from the likes off Kingambit and Keldeo. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky team mateteammate for Maushold, being able to take out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, (RC) which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Skarmory, and Dragonite for Maushold. Blissey is aan amazing special wall being able to tank special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave. Blissey also provides entry hazard support with Stealth Rock; This allows Maushold to have a chance to OHKO Gliscor.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
Quality checked by:
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:sv/maushold:
[SET]
Maushold @ Wide Lens
Name: Tidy Up sweeper
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Tidy Up
- Population Bomb
- Bite
- Encore / Low Kick / Play Rough

[SET DETAILS]
Maushold paired with Tidy Up, (RC) Maushold is a good set upsetup sweeper for Normal teams as it is able to out speedoutspeed and take out threats like non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, non-Iron Defense Zamazenta, and Urshifu-R. At +1 attackAttack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move being able to take out a plethora of threats if not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows for Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like DragpultDragapult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves such as Corviknight using Defog or Kingambit using Sucker Punch; This allows for Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Kingambit, Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Sableye on a switch in, Hydreigon, and unboosted Roaring Moon. (RP), (AC) Butbut doing so, (RC) leaves Maushold vulnerable to Kingambit. Wide Lens is the best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great team mateteammate for mausholdMaushold, providing a fighting immunity while also being able to fool its foes due to Illusion. Hisuian Zoroark also takes out physically bulky Pokemon like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast. Furthermore, Hisuian Zoroark can use Trick to lockslock walls like Sableye with Choice Specs due to Trickinto undesirable moves by giving them Choice Specs, which eases Maushold sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao, (RC) and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides entry hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the fighting matchup, (RC) by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. Indeedee also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep. Furthermore, Indeedee sets up Psychic Terrain so that Maushold does not fear revenge killing attempts from the likes off Kingambit and Keldeo. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky team mateteammate for Maushold, being able to take out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, (RC) which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Skarmory, and Dragonite for Maushold. Blissey is aan amazing special wall being able to tank special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave. Blissey also provides entry hazard support with Stealth Rock; This allows Maushold to have a chance to OHKO Gliscor.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
Quality checked by:
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https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/captaindaimyo.602431/
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[SET]
Maushold @ Wide Lens
Name: Tidy Up sweeper Sweeper
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Tidy Up
- Population Bomb
- Bite
- Encore / Low Kick / Play Rough

[SET DETAILS]
Tidy Up Maushold is a good setup sweeper for Normal teams, (AC) as it is able to outspeed and take out threats like non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, non-Iron Defense Zamazenta, and Urshifu-R. At +1 Attack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move, (AC) being able to take taking out a plethora of threats not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows for Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like Dragapult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves such as locking Corviknight using into Defog or and Kingambit using into Sucker Punch; This this allows for Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Kingambit, Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Hydreigon, Sableye on a switch in, Hydreigon, and unboosted Roaring Moon, but doing so running it leaves Maushold vulnerable to Kingambit. Wide Lens is the best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great teammate for Maushold, providing a fighting Fighting immunity while also being able to fool fooling its foes due to Illusion. Hisuian Zoroark It also takes out physically bulky Pokemon like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast. Furthermore, Hisuian Zoroark and (merging, sentences serve the same purpose) can use Trick to lock walls like Sableye into undesirable moves by giving them Choice Specs, which eases Maushold Maushold's sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps against (sweeping is applied to a team, not individual mons) potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides entry hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the fighting Fighting matchup by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. Indeedee It also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep, (period > comma) Furthermore, Indeedee and sets up Psychic Terrain so that Maushold does not fear revenge killing attempts from the likes off of Kingambit and Keldeo. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky teammate for Maushold, being able to take taking out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, (AC) which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Skarmory, and Dragonite for Maushold. Blissey is an amazing special wall, (AC) being able to tank tanking special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave. Blissey It also provides hazard support with Stealth Rock, (semicolon > comma) This allows which gives Maushold to have a chance to OHKO Gliscor.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
Quality checked by:
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  • remember that vs which- you made an incorrect fix in removing the comma before "which would otherwise be troublesome". here's a guide on the difference between the two
  • "being able to [verb]" is nearly always filler; you can correct it to the -ing form of the verb
  • words aren't capitalized after semicolons
  • you don't need to actively remove "entry" before "hazard" after the first instance in a paragraph, it's just optional
  • in general, make sure to remember rules you've already seen- to internalize stuff/have a reference, i recommend making a personal doc that you add to whenever you encounter a rule you didn't initially get, but do whatever works for you
 

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[SET]
Maushold @ Wide Lens
Name: Tidy Up sweeper Sweeper
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Tidy Up
- Population Bomb
- Bite
- Encore / Low Kick / Play Rough

[SET DETAILS]
Tidy Up Maushold is a good setup sweeper for Normal teams, (AC) as it is able to outspeed and take out threats like non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, non-Iron Defense Zamazenta, and Urshifu-R. At +1 Attack, Population Bomb becomes a fierce move, (AC) being able to take taking out a plethora of threats not running Rocky Helmet, notably Toxapex and Gouging Fire. Bite allows for Maushold to threaten Ghost-types like Dragapult and Hisuian Zoroark at +1, while Encore lets Maushold lock foes into moves such as locking Corviknight using into Defog or and Kingambit using into Sucker Punch; This this allows for Maushold to get a potential Tidy Up turn. Low Kick can be run over Encore to hit pesky Steel- and Rock-types like Kingambit, Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, and Tyranitar. Play Rough threatens Dark- and Dragon-types like Hydreigon, Sableye on a switch in, Hydreigon, and unboosted Roaring Moon, but doing so running it leaves Maushold vulnerable to Kingambit. Wide Lens is the best item for Maushold to ensure Population Bomb is accurate as possible.

Hisuian Zoroark is a great teammate for Maushold, providing a fighting Fighting immunity while also being able to fool fooling its foes due to Illusion. Hisuian Zoroark It also takes out physically bulky Pokemon like Gholdengo and Archaludon with Shadow Ball and Focus Blast. Furthermore, Hisuian Zoroark and (merging, sentences serve the same purpose) can use Trick to lock walls like Sableye into undesirable moves by giving them Choice Specs, which eases Maushold Maushold's sweeping capabilities. Ditto reverse sweeps against (sweeping is applied to a team, not individual mons) potential setup sweepers like Chien-Pao and Ceruledge, while Maushold provides entry hazard removal via Tidy Up, keeping Ditto as healthy as possible. Indeedee eases the fighting Fighting matchup by dealing with Zamazenta and Choice Specs Keldeo with Expanding Force. Indeedee It also provides Healing Wish support, allowing one of its teammates a second chance to sweep, (period > comma) Furthermore, Indeedee and sets up Psychic Terrain so that Maushold does not fear revenge killing attempts from the likes off of Kingambit and Keldeo. Ursaluna-B is a great bulky teammate for Maushold, being able to take taking out Steel- and Poison-types like Archaludon and Sneasler, (AC) which would otherwise be troublesome to Maushold. Calm Mind Terapagos with BoltBeam coverage deals with pesky Flying- and Dragon-types like Corviknight, Skarmory, and Dragonite for Maushold. Blissey is an amazing special wall, (AC) being able to tank tanking special hits from Flutter Mane and Greninja while also spreading paralysis via Thunder Wave. Blissey It also provides hazard support with Stealth Rock, (semicolon > comma) This allows which gives Maushold to have a chance to OHKO Gliscor.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sasha.510532/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/captaindaimyo.602431/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/veti.612907/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/solarbeam.470115/
  • remember to capitalize type names: "Fighting", not "fighting"
  • remember that vs which- you made an incorrect fix in removing the comma before "which would otherwise be troublesome". here's a guide on the difference between the two
  • "being able to [verb]" is nearly always filler; you can correct it to the -ing form of the verb
  • words aren't capitalized after semicolons
  • you don't need to actively remove "entry" before "hazard" after the first instance in a paragraph, it's just optional
  • in general, make sure to remember rules you've already seen- to internalize stuff/have a reference, i recommend making a personal doc that you add to whenever you encounter a rule you didn't initially get, but do whatever works for you
Implemented, ty!!!
 

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