ORAS OU Rate my first OU team

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Hi everyone, i'm trying to get into competitive battling so i created my first OU team that i already used in Pokemon Showdown a couple of times. The results are pretty good for my first attempt, for now my rating is:

OU: Elo: 1110 GXE: 43.9% Glicko-1: 1453 ± 47

The team:

Staraptor @ Life Orb
Ability: Reckless
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Close Combat
- Steel Wing
- U-turn

Cloyster @ Focus Sash
Ability: Skill Link
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Naughty Nature
- Shell Smash
- Icicle Spear
- Rock Blast
- Surf

Flygon @ Assault Vest
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Dragon Pulse
- Earth Power
- Flamethrower
- Steel Wing

Audino-Mega @ Audinite
Ability: Healer
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
- Heal Bell
- Calm Mind
- Draining Kiss
- Flamethrower

Snorlax @ Chesto Berry
Ability: Immunity
EVs: 156 HP / 252 Def / 100 SpD
Impish Nature
- Stockpile
- Belly Drum
- Rest
- Crunch

Scolipede @ Focus Sash
Ability: Speed Boost
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SpD / 4 Spe
Careful Nature
- Megahorn
- Earthquake
- Protect
- Baton Pass

I also used Sigilyph for a bit instead of Flygon.

Sigilyph @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Magic Guard
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 168 Def / 88 SpD
Calm Nature
- Cosmic Power
- Stored Power
- Roost
- Psycho Shift

I already noticed that my team isn't super-reliable because of the many set-up sweepers (or tanks) that i use. And i noticed very important weaknesses in Rock and Electric, also i don't have a great moves coverage.

Can you help me build my team? Thank in advice!
 

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Hi there, welcome to Smogon! Unfortunately I'll have to lock this for the time being as the RMT rules require that you provide in-depth descriptions for each Pokemon to explain your choices and their roles. Please read the rules carefully and take a look at other RMTs and the RMT archive to see the kind of detail and format we require. Since you're new to this I'd also recommend checking out the strategy dex for Pokemon analyses and the OU forum which has many resources that can help you get a better grasp of the tier. If you need any help don't hesitate to ask. Good luck!
 
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